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Roat My Landing Page For Design Agency
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Vishal Anand
Please roast the landing page. I have created this design agency.
www.cognosix.com
You'll need to work overall on your copy - "Web Design Agency For Startup Founder!!!" does not sound so professional. I understand the sense of urgency, but I believe you can be direct and effective without using so many exclamation marks.
Much appreciated. I changed and this is just a start, I think will change more design in future. Thanks for the roast. Was a toast :-)
headline and banner are fine
fluffy sections : What we do, why partner with us - unless you wrote it for SEO
portfolio is fine I guess should be after banner
If you say its for founders - write 2 founders testimonials and show some website - thats enough for some one to enquire. I guess I did roast it.
"Your Gateway to Digital Excellence!" What exactly does that mean in practical, business language?
There are millions of agency websites. I need to know at a single, simple glance what it is exactly that yours does.
This: "Our passion lies in crafting unique, engaging, and impactful digital experiences that propel your brand to new heights." is written from your own perspective ("our passion"). It should instead be a clear, practical statement from the client perspective of what it is they would get from engagement with you.
I'm confused by what you offer. In your introduction ("our passion"), you write about branding, yet below the fold, you write about fixing distorted images and AI. I think most people would be confused at this first point of contact with your home page.
Try to avoid language which is vague and cliched. Instead, craft clear and simple statements of what it is your clients will be better at or achieve more with because of engaging with you.
Why are there no contact details in the footer? Credibility is improved by having physical addresses and real contact details.
Try to get a favicon which is not the default WordPress one.
thanks for the feedback. I have changed fee thigs as per your suggestion. Also getting the logo and contact in , should be done by tomorrow.