Rock the boat: Landing page for Latex Pillows
Hello people, please rock the boat. Critique and roast this landing page design, and let me know what you think.
https://sa.gentelle.com/natural-latex-pillow/
This landing page was designed (not 100% complete yet) to educate people on what Gentelle's Latex Pillow is all about.
It's primary objective is to of course increase sales, but at the same time, ensure that visitors have a good idea of what they're buying.
#landingpage #roast #design #objective
Ready for some honest feedback?
Okay so this page isn't aimed at americans/europeans right?
The pricing is in a currency I have not heard of.
The chat options are using platforms americans do not use.
I don't feel you have highlighted the social proof/testimonials enough...where are the faces of the people who left a review?
Hey @Ihsan
Here are some suggestion :
SHOP FOR PILLOWS THAT ARE truly enjoyable, restful, and natural. --------- enjoyable, restful, and natural
Flexible, soft, cool & firm. ------- Put it like a check list or bullet point not in that form
If you want to have a full report let me know
Thank you for the interesting suggestion. We've already got a checklist in 2 places so a 3rd checklist might feel a bit too much. However let me give it try!
You have 2 times the SAME checklist. Delete the first time it appears. Put it like a bullet list.
For the one I talk, it's the one customer will focus on. Who doesn't want a pillow that is flexible, soft, cool and firm? Most people search a pillow with those charateristics
Who look at a pillow orthopaedic, mildew proof etc?? People who know exactly where to find this exact information.
Do you see the difference?
I can do a deeper analyze. You will have all the flaws corrected on the page and turn it into a conversion page.
I am a SaaS copywriter. I can help you achieve the goal you set yourself with this.
Send me an email now
felice.ineza@gmail.com