Sales copy and lading page feedback would be much appreciated!
https://chipy.io/
Hello all! I would love some feedback, suggestions on the landing page/site I have currently ( https://chipy.io ) I am not the best at sales copy so I look to other sites and put them into my own words, so especially any sales copy suggestions!
Goals:
- Sufficiently convey what the platform does but don't over load the visitor.
- Make the trial setup easy and streamline.
- Every page has a clear "next step" that leads to theme selection.
Let me know if you think it hits the goals or not, or even if you think I need to change my goals. Thank you in advance for your input!
'We help you grow online' seems like a better message to start with rather than a bullet list of things that you offer.
Typically, the advice is to focus on the needs/pains of customers, not what you offer.
And actually, I just went and had a peek at Zapier and Webflow homepages, maybe you can gain inspiration from them?
The 'Increase your performance by 300%+' also feels kinda random and out of place, plus I always dislike it when companies make these claims. Where has that stat come from?
There seems to be an image missing from next to 'Smoothest Drag & Drop Experience', there's nothing there atm.
Great feedback! Ill be thinking of a short pitch to replace the bullet points that touches on a pain and solution.
Also the 300% figure is just me spit-balling on productivity of bringing your web builder, funnel builder, shop and crm under one platform, so I see exactly what you're saying. If its not linked to a review it just sounds like BS, so its gone.
As for the missing image, that is strange, I cant seem to replicate that on any of my devices, ill have to dig on that for a bit.
Again thanks for the advice, huge help!
-Mike