Seeking feedback for a newsletter landing page
https://fastthinkingfounders.substack.com/about
I'm starting a newsletter to help aspiring entrepreneurs with ADHD follow through with their ideas. Deciding between using “substack about” as my landing page, or creating a separate landing page. What are your thoughts?
In the "Why Subscribe" section, I would suggest that you present the information in a concise and organized manner, making it easy for readers to understand and grasp the value proposition of the newsletter in detail. I gather you don't want to be too salesy but it's important to get the value proposition across.
E.g .
Why subscribe:
Gain Inspiration: Discover inspiring stories from successful entrepreneurs who thrived despite ADHD. Learn how they harnessed their unique abilities, turned challenges into opportunities, and built remarkable businesses.
Access Coping Strategies: Get proven coping strategies tailored for entrepreneurs with ADHD. Learn how to harness your strengths, manage distractions, and cultivate habits for enhanced productivity and success.
Actionable Advice: Get practical techniques for time management, goal setting, prioritization, and decision-making—essential skills for entrepreneurs, especially those with ADHD.
Community and Support: Join a vibrant community of like-minded individuals who understand your challenges. Share experiences, exchange tips, and find support from fellow entrepreneurs. Together, we can overcome obstacles and celebrate successes.
ADHD-Powered Entrepreneurship: Gain valuable insights into the world of ADHD-powered entrepreneurship. Embrace your neurodivergent perspective as a strength and unlock innovative ideas that set you apart.
Subscribe now and unleash your entrepreneurial success with ADHD as your secret weapon. Let us help you turn your ideas into reality.
Sign up today and unlock your full potential!
Please note: Take inspiration from ChatGPT, that is exactly what all these ai tools are supposed to do. - help improve productivity and accelerate the brainstorming process.
Your idea is noble, so I wish you all the success :)
My suggestion for clarity and to take action:
Are you an entrepreneur (or aspiring to be one) who has the knowledge to deal with ADHD but can't follow through?
Maybe you're looking for inspiration, support, and a community of startup owners dealing with ADHD like you.
The key to making change is through real stories, breakthrough coping strategies, and entrepreneurial advice.
And I've got you covered. Join my newsletter to get empowered and find support for your unique entrepreneurial journey.
You'll experience real change and push your business to succeed.
I think this is a great suggestion, but I think it’s too sales copy-ish for now, it doesn’t fit the idea that I have for the newsletter.
If however I don’t see results I might pivot to something like this.
Congrats on the launch! I've added some comments here - https://visualdebug.com/show/fastthinkingfounders.substack.com
Also subscribed and looking forward for the content :)
Ah thanks so much for subscribing. I immediately implemented your feedback.
Working on the content, as a start I am going to share my personal journey and currently actively searching for ADHD entrepreneurs, indie hackers and solopreneurs to interview, because that’s where I see real value.
After creating some content and maybe gathering some social proof, would you recommend a custom separate landing page?
No need, in my opinion. Keep everything tidy on one landing page - don't bother the user to navigate through series of pages, put everything in front of the user and make them hit that subscribe button :)
Looks great. Wish you success. Now need to deliver some content.
I'm also writing a newsletter about entrepreneurship and startups, and it's quite a hard process.