After one month, We’re finally done with the proposal and website (attached below). I hope this helps paint a picture of what we are trying to do. Building a brand and narrative around startups is something that we really want to do :)
I'm seeking feedback for my landing page
Website: siriusdigital.ca
Let me know if I can help you or companies in your network in any way!
I understand now the "turn it into a conversation piece". Sure looks like you guys have a plan to make that happen. Clever agency model too.
So I'm thinking about this scenario:
A startup founder is starting something and thinking about all that is necessary to get a startup to explode. Thinking ahead, she thinks of all the variables, outcomes, and falls on your site. She'll think "I need to bookmark these people for when things explode."
So the "things may go out of hand" bit is smart.
Then I'm thinking about this other scenario:
Things did go out of hand. The team can't deal with the attention they're getting. Is it too late? Do they offer an emergency package? "I'll just hire a community manager".
Have you considered building more trust by using the bottom of your home page to sell/give away a guide on hiring a community manager? You'd be creating competition (sort of), but it'd pay back in good will in the event that that community manager is overloaded in the operations and can't help with the brand/big picture redress.
I don't think the h1 and h2 are impactful.
Also "THINGS MAY GO OUT OF HAND" is not idiomatic. The phase is "get out of hand".
Hope this help, and good luck!
This is some great feedback! Thanks Steven :)