Seeking feedback on my landing page
Hello. I'm a solo-preneur, making a link in bio specialized for paid asking. With some help of contractors, I've nearly finished my MVP.
Before public launch, I would like to hear from my peer indie hackers on your impression of my product.
Finding PMF is a seriously hard thing.
Your help will be highly appreciated :)
Saw your post asking for feedback on 20min.storee, he grammar/clarity points others raised are fixable fast, and I think the naming confusion ("20min is a cool name, but what does it represent?") is worth solving before launch too, not after.
I do free copy passes on exactly this kind of thing No pitch.
Want me to send over a rewritten hero + a couple of positioning options that might clear up the name question?
I think this a really great idea. I feel like it’s something I would actually use. In the current world of everyone trying figure out how to get AI to provide the expertise, you went the other way - back to humans. If you can truly make this a frictionless payment process it could be a really popular service. For your sake, I hope it is!
As for critique of the landing page, overall the design and motion on the page were fine, plenty to keep me engaged. The only issues I saw were grammar. Felt very non-native written. For example, there are numerous places where you have a capital letter after a comma. That’s incorrect. Have someone else read it over and give you feedback. Or even chatGPT can help.
Lastly, 20min is a cool name, but what does it represent? Perhaps you could use whatever that represents in your value prop explanation. Good luck!!
Thank you for your warmhearted appreciation on the product and detailed feedback on landing page. I really appreciate it!
Regarding word phrases, yeah it's a good idea to have GPT smooth out grammars and expressions.
Regarding the name 20min, the very first version of the product idea was a link in bio for 20 minute-long video consultation booking. I guess it has more features now so that it became hard to match the name and value prop. Am still thinking of a better name. Any suggestions? lol
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Awesome idea, the services are the new way that everyone can make money, and your platform can facilitate that. Good Job.
I like the idea and the design! very cool product
The TAG section on the homepage needs to be reformatted as having only one tag per line takes up too much space on mobile.
Good point. Will reflect this soon. Appreciate your comment :)
Hi, the landing page looks awesome but i have some doubts on your idea. How are you planning to verify the authenticity of the people on your platform. How would you know if the people are describing them in a truthful manner and not scamming others ?
Yes, we do have a trust issue to solve but I thought trust problem was a somewhat next stage problem which I can think about a bit later once the main hypothesis is proven to be right. So I was thinking of first approaching creators and experts who already have their own trust-based audience channel. Doing so, I can validate whether this is a product worth adding additional layers without diving too deep from the beginning. This was my thought. Wondering what you think about my opinion :)
If I may, this seems like a test of reputation, not necessarily verified skill. At first you could personally vet everyone who signs up via some social links you can require during onboarding. You could also instill a system where you don’t charge for advice or pay the advisor (or you pay them very little at a loss) until they reach a certain reputation score. Probably similar to monetizing YouTube?
The reputation score seems like a legit idea that could be implemented. It would also increase the activity in your platform drastically.
Looks great - can't believe you made this by yourself!
My only comment is that it wasn't extremely clear what "수익 창출 플랫폼" meant.
Oh, I guess you must be Korean as we made some ux writing variations based on user's browser language settings. That just means 'Monetization solution' as the word link in bio isn't much familiar among Koreans. Btw, your name reminds me of a renowned VC partner. Aren't you? lol
Ah, that makes sense. I take it you're not based in Korea then?
"Btw, your name reminds me of a renowned VC partner." -> LOL I wish! haha
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Yup. My two co-founders and I are based in Korea.
Cool. Wish you the best luck on your journey! Let me know if there is anything I can help you with such as giving out some feedback on MVP
Thank you. Likewise. Will ping you once I'm ready to post my own landing page! :)
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Hey! Our landing page is out too: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-a5fb376ef6
Can you please take a look?
I think it looks clean, colours kind of get to my eyes a bit (background cream, purple, cream then white) But like the cream. A couple other things:
-i feel like on my end the style coach/ career mentor/relationship images is a slide but it is not sliding but stuck to the right. (cuts off the entry at "pers" which i assume is personal trainer?)
Thank you for your feedback! Just wondering on your comment 'not sure about the gmail at the bottom', I assume this mean using gmail looks unprofessional?
yeah mate - to me, it looks cheap so id kind of be like .... hm? Not necessarily the case for your target audience
Hey, I think your landing page is pretty straightforward, which is good, a single piece of comment that might help, is that, being a new business, at first I had a hard time understanding what this was, specially with the video that's to the right of the screen, I think you should make that a little bit slower, I felt like it was too fast and I couldn't understand what it was. but then I scrolled down and understood. hope this helps
Thank you so much for your comment! I will upload slower version of video reflecting your comment. Thank you so much!
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