Seeking Honest Feedback on Our New Landing Page

Hello fellow Indie Hackers!

I’m Joey Bolohan, co-founder of a service that’s designed to transform missed calls into sales opportunities for small to medium-sized businesses. Our system, a direct SMS text message provider, ensures that businesses never miss a call again by converting these missed calls into active sales leads. The best part? No need for any external accounts like Twilio.

We’ve been developing this software for the past 18 months and are thrilled to be rolling it out across several industry verticals. The first cab off the rank is a dedicated landing page for restaurants, with more vertical-specific pages in the pipeline.

Here’s where I need your invaluable input:

We’re about to drive traffic to this page through cold outbound emails and paid social marketing campaigns, but before we go live, I would love to get your 100% pure, unfiltered feedback on:

Images: Do they resonate with the target audience?

Content: Is the value proposition clear and compelling?

Buttons: Are the CTAs enticing enough to click?

Layout: Is the information structured in a way that’s easy to navigate?

Here’s the link to the landing page:

https://enzak.com/missed-call-text-back-for-restaurants/

Additionally, I’m eager to hear your thoughts on the best channels to market our product. Which platforms have you found effective for similar products?

Your insights will be instrumental in refining our approach and ensuring our landing page not only captures attention but also converts. Thank you for taking the time to help out—it means a lot!

Looking forward to your honest and constructive feedback.

Cheers,
Joey Bolohan
Co-Founder
Enzak.com