Send me your Landing Page and I will give you UI/UX Feedback

hey @officialiqtest thanks for reaching out. Here are my thoughts:

1. I really like the structure of your landing page. You use 4 big CTA's which are positioned in a nice area of the page. When I first opened your page I got a little bit confused. Here's why: the background moved for like 2 seconds but then it got kinda frozen and stayed at the same position. I think that it would be better if you could keep it moving throughout the visit. Either lower the opacity or make the mouse interact with them. Here's how: If I move my mouse around the title the background network can kinda follow the mouse or something like that.

2. As the creator of this IQ test you know every single feature that you offer to your customers. Therefore it's always pretty hard to stick with the core ones. In my eyes your explanations are a little bit too long. It looks more like a text rather than a short explanation of the feature. I would shorten it up to only half of the current text.

3. As an alternative, why don't you create a horizontal slide bar? Keep the three main features on the page but offer your customers to explore more by clicking an arrow on the right that swipes right to other features of yours.

4. You really focus on making your product trustworthy which is awesome! All the celebrities, big companies etc. it looks like these people have actually participated in your test which gives everything so much more credebility. Nice job!

5. Your website is (to me) a little bit indecisive with animations. Why do you only animate the "What others had to say IQ Test?" section? I think using some very tiny movements in the previous content might make the landing page experience more fluid and harmonic.

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Cheers,

Jorim

Very good interface 👏

You should probably make it more clear either before the test or during that the results require payment.

hey @launchbeast here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. I would consider changing your main header. Let's split it up a little bit:

• "Learn from successful people" -> what am i learning exactly from them? Where is the benefit?

• "and teach what you know"-> what should I teach others? I mean... I know how to cook, how to repair my bike, how to work out effectively, etc.

There is a high chance that people won't read your subheader which explains that you are building a community where people can learn and share career advise. In order to avoid confusing people I would put the word "community" right in your main header. Write stuff like "Join our community to learn how people make successful career moves" or something even shorter.

2. The image in the back has a different background color than your website background which creates a rough visual transition. I would only use the icons without the grey background (if possible) or use a greadient that makes your website background fade into the image.

3. If pages don't exist, you should better use illustrations instead of text. Check out undraw.co for inspirations.

4. The "Go back to Career Move." text should be a button that should stand below the "Sorry, this page doesn’t exist." illustration.

5. I would give your buttons a bigger curve because which is equal to the curve which you use on the edges of your logo. This gives the whole thing more harmony.

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Cheers,

Jorim

Hey @xavier it's funny because I have also watched a landing page feedback for you on another feed. Anyways, I will give it my shot as well. Here we go:

1. I like the movement of the circles in the background. In my eyes it gives the page a more dynamic sense. nonetheless, these circles have literally nothing to do with your product right? If I was you, I would replace these circles with actual logos that you have already created. If you do that, the moving distraction is actually worth being deistracted.

2. What's the meaning behind all these lines that go straight throughout your landing page? If there is none, why would you risk confusing your potential customers. Remember: Design is only as good as it serves the need of your customers.

3. I would replace the tab-names "reliable company" , "kind company" etc. just by mentioning the categories that you have already served. for example: playful, authentic, etc. In the end by saying "company" in the end people might
   get under pressure because if they choose a "reliable company" design they will be afraid to not be able to represent themselves as a "kind company" with your logo. Do you get what I mean? I think basic adjectives should be sufficient psychology-wise.

4. Your pricing (which is printed in contrast to the white background) is kinda hiding itself if it is surrounded by two huuge black blocks of content. I think that you can change the hierarchy there. Otherwise it looks like the pricing is kinda squeezed in between them.

5. The top bar is not in harmony if the "my account section" is not in the same line as the other texts. Don't use two rows and straighten the word.

6. Here's something that just came to my head. If I was you I'd also change the content hierarchy. In my eyes the part where you present your designs should have much higher priority than a referral from a beta tester. People want to see what logo you can build for them first before they actually seek for confirmation/trust. That's at least my opinion.

7. From what I read, I dont really know if I can design my own logo or if it will be designed for me. Despite that I would already imploy a tool on your landing page where potential customers could design their own logo or at least fill out some of their logo requirements. This will lead to incremental customer engagement. If your customers have already put effort into something, they will be less likely to reject your offer. If they have finished their "engagement" you can ask for them to sign up in order not to loose their effort which they have just put into filling out or designing a logo.

Hope that these tips where helpful to you. If you have improved your website feel free to contact me again so that I can check in with you.

Hey @pyepye thanks for commenting. I checked out your website and find it very clear which is awesome. The website offers a nice balance between text and illustrations as well as a understandable text hierarchy. There are a few points that I want you to think about:

1. How responsive is the design? I was checking out your design on a relatively large monitor but the website only used 50% of the total width. Especially in the "how it works" session I would recommend giving each content a little bit more space regarding the width.

2. You have used a very strong drop shadow on your title. I would make it way smoother which creates a better sense of depth in your design.

3. There is a blue dot on the laptop illustration that replaces the camera. I would replace that with an authentic darker color that matches the comupter design.

4. The benefit-section is (in my eyes) a little bit too long. As a user, if I was interested I would read up until the end of the how it works section but the benefits are just too much of a scrolling hassle which looks quite overwhelming.

Hope I was able to help out :)

Hey Jonathan! Sorry for my late reply. It's been quite a while since I have visited this post. As I see, you guys have put lots of effort into your landing page and therefore I'm happy to help you out!

First of all I gotta compliment you on the simplicity of the website. Little text and many nicely designed animations that catch my eye. You tried to keep it as simple as possible which I like a lot. To be honest this website is very hard to criticize due to its professionalism but anyways here's my feedback:

1. In my eyes its extremely important that the visitors are always able/ conscious about where to "sign up" or "get early accesss" no matter where they currently are on your website. This is unfortunately not the case here. You guys have only implemented one CTA in the hero section. If I wanted to commit any actions I had to scroll either all the way to the top or to the bottom in order to sign up / get early access. Therefore I would either equip the navbar with another cta and making it sticky to the top while scrolling or I would implement more CTAs in the middle of the landing page. There might be a good spot below the section "Better document lifecycles." but to be honest... just make the navbar sticky and this should solve all your problems :)

2. When trying to scroll in the beginning I get forced to watch the first 2 seconds of the hero animation which makes it feel restricted/forced and I dont like to get deprived of my right to scroll. Not sure if you guys have planned this or if its just a bug.

3. Getting early access is all nice and good but I wouldn't send the visitors to another page simply for typing in their email into an input field. It might be better if the email input field would appear on the same spot after I click on the "Get early access" CTA.

4. Another point to the "Get early access" CTA: Tbh with you I'm not the biggest fan of leaving my email address somewhere as I never know how much spam I will receive after having left my email with you. Why dont you just try to offer the people a live demo of your software on the website. By changing the CTA to "Try it out" and linking it to a small demo where I can move some rectangles around makes it wayyy more appealing and interactive which makes me more likely to leave my email at the same time. Remember: People are way more likely to leave their private email if they know the product and if they know what to expect instead of waiting for a surprise that might turn bad.

To sum it up increase the touch points where visitors can commit by pressing a CTA (e.g. sticky navbar) and show the people right away what your great software offers this will probably get you higher conversion rates than if you'd just ask for commitments in terms of email adresses right away.

Hope that I was able to help you out. :) All in all your website looks really awesome and I'm curious to see where this goes. Keep me up to date about your landing page changes ;)

Grüße aus Mannheim,

Jorim

PS: Let's stay in touch! I have just sent you an invitation on LinkedIn.

Gey @virissimo, yeah I can't believe that as well but im trying to keep up with all the links as good as I can :) Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. Alright. there are lots of things to do for you. First of all you nit a top bar. You can put your logo and other links like "how it works" "benefits" "Faq" and a Call to action button in there. It makes your website more overviewable in the first place. So clearly separate your top bar from the rest of the website by either apooplying a frame or a smooth shadow.

2. Your content is wayyy to squeezed together. Its kinda cool that there is no need to swipe but honelsty as a customer I wouldn't like to read so many notes like there. Give your content more place to breathe. Seperate each section from "benefits" to "how it works" to "additional FAQs" etc. For each section you have to use images. Check out undraw.co for more information.

3. There are great design platforms where you can get a better feeling on how websites can look like or be structured like. Therefore check out sources like dribbble.com behance.com printerest.com or simply google.com or instagram.com there are lots of ui designers giving you tips and tricks on the basics.

I hope that i was able to help you out with my thoughts. Don't forget to send me an upvote and a follow if you liked it. Remember, IndieHackers help out where they can ;P

Cheers,

Jorim

hey @marcobrito, thanks for recognizing my efforts mate. I really appreciate that!Although I have almost spent the whole day writing reviews i always find energy for compassionate people like you. ;) Therefore, here are my thoughts:

1. The text "Por enquanto, disponível apenas no concelho de Mafra." is very tiny and hard to read. is it on semibold? If so, I would definitely reduce the thickness down to regular or at least make the sentence a tad larger.

2. Leave more space between the "Estas são algumas das categorias mais procuradas por nossos clientes." and the icons below. The space will make your visitors being able to breath again.

3. When hovering over the referrals, the images get larger (which I like) but get cut off by a rectangle on both sides. This seems not planned. Besides that i would apply a drop shadow if the icons zoom in because by zooming you get the circle closer to you and "further away" from the website.

4. The cards under "Dicas antes de contratar." should be all the way clickable. Right now I need to specifically click on the name or on the way to tiny read more-secrtion in order to open the card.

5. The phone mockup under "Como funciona." kinda seems to be placed a little bit weird. Simply by the "physical surroundings" i wouldn't expect the phone to be positioned so ratatedly. I recommend the following:turn the angle back to 0 degrees, make the ohone a little bit larger and tilt it a tiny bit to either the right or the left.

Despite that everything looks pretty professional and overviewable. Well done! Here is one final personal opinion from me: I somehow find the combination of that bright red and the turquoise a little bit odd. I would replace it with a fresh blue color. Try out the following color code: #79A9E8 (anything around that will surely also work)

I hope that i was able to help you out with my thoughts. Don't forget to send me an upvote and a follow if you liked it. Remember, IndieHackers help out where they can ;P

Cheers,

Jorim

PS: Let me know if you want to change the color. Im intrestedin seeing how your website will look afterwards hehe :D

hey there. Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. Let-it-breeeathe. Your website is a little bit squeezed together. Give it more negative space so that you don't overwhelm your customers with text.

2. Holy shit I didn't realize that I can actually edit your homepage myself lol! What a great idea. I would definitely change priorities between "get notified" and try now. Users dont want to be notified in the first place. They wanna try out your product!!!!

3. The "trynow" button was so secondary that i first thought it wouldn't even work. I didn't realize that there was a whole toolbar opening on the right. Probably because I thought that the default gif would have jhust moved a little bit.

4. Afte pressing the try now button you definitely gotta make the website look more like a workspace-mode. Otherwise your users won't realize the great opportunity to just try stuff out.

Hope I was able to help you out with my feedback. If it was helpful feel free to vote my comment/post and to give me a follow. Also feel free to let me know when you applied some of my recommendations to your website. :)

Cheers,

Jorim

Hey there. here are my thoughts:

1. Improve typography: Make sure your header is bigger than the other text and more bold.

2. The whole text above the device is kinda squeezed. Decide about 2 things that you want our users to read first and put the others below.

3. Add a top bar for a better navigation throughout your landing page.

4. Check out dribbble.com in order to find out what design might be the most suitable for your product. Besides that follow thefutur on Youtube to learn more about the basic principle of ui ux design so that you can build your website upon it.

Hope I was able to help you out with my feedback. If it was helpful feel free to vote my comment/post and to give me a follow. Also feel free to let me know when you applied some of my recommendations to your website. :)

Cheers,

Jorim

Hey there. Here are my thoughts:

1. First look is great. You should definitely implement a EN/ feature so that english people can also understand the content of your website.

2. I like the design color of your landing page. The main color is obviously blue but why do you suddenly switch to a completely different color midway? Stick with one color it makes your website more harmonic. Despite that great Design. I can't help you more because I don't understand the content of your website.

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Cheers,

Jorim

Alright. here are my thoughts to your landing page:

1. In my eyes you use two main headers. The first one is "No Code website builder that runs on Google Sheets" and the second one is "The fastest way to build data rich websites.". In order to not overwhelm your users I#d recommend only using one. You can implement the second one somewhere way town. MAybe at the bottom.

2. The image with the changin colors is super stressful to watch as i can't focus on the content. Besides that you might get some issues with epileptic patients.

3. There is a little bit too much movement on your landing page. SOme things are flying in from the right, some things are flying in from the left, siome from the bottom, etc. Combined with the colorchanging image it more feels like a nice LSD trip but it will keep me distracted from the content that you wanna convey.

4. The dropshaows of some of the images (there are 3 in specific) is way to intense. You should propably make it more transparent.

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Cheers,

Jorim

Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. Throughout your whole website I can only see one CTA button. i would definitely use more.

2. I don't like that the reviews are suddenly disappearing after time. Just use three reviews and let them stay next to each other otherwise users wont even have the chance to read the content. Have you ever tried to read the whole review before it disappears? Try it and you will find out that the disappearing thing is not a good idea.

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Cheers,

Jorim

Hey @BraydenTW, I love your slogan "THML themes made easy as pie" Why dont you use this slogan instead of that generic design template headline?

1. I love the website design but your logo design doesn't really fit to it. I'd recommend updating it.

2. I'd offer more free desings or at least free trials.

3. I enjoy the preview. it really gives customers a feel of how the desings might work. Good job with that.

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Jorim

@TzuRaySu haha okay hope I woun't create any tears or something like that ;D

here are my thoughts:

1. Change your title from "Discovering & Managing Anime song covers
   can be Super Easy" to "Discovering & Managing Anime song covers
   made Super Easy"

2. Use a top bar for stuff like language changing but don't just put it right under the CTA button otherwise it will not stick out anylonger.

3. It sscared the shit out of me when somebody suddenly spoke out of the webiste. I would mute the video automatically until users that actually want to see it turn on the sound.

4. use a subheader why it is actually desireable to Manage Anime song covers
   easily. Show your users the benefit an d make some sort of feature and benefit list like @officialiqtest did it.

5. Don't explain features in your video, explain how you can help users solve their problem. Why should people care about features if they don't even know why they should use your service.

6. I would already implement an image on the website on how it looks like. Make it easily accessible. I don't wanna click on a button first in order to use your service. Implement it on your main page right away.

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Cheers,

Jorim

hey @Michael_Andreuzza !Lol I know your face from my Adobe XD projects because I have used it in one of my prototypes from an add-on haha :D

Anyways, here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. i love your hover effects.

2. I would increase the text size of your main header. it doesn't really distinguish from your subheader which is "For startups & personal use." besides that reduce the row-gaps because in my eyes they are a little bit too extreme.

3. The head of your illustration makes some reaaallyyy weird moves. I like the thought but I think that you need to use more natural movements of the head. Otherwise it looks like the guy at the computer suffers a stroke or is currently dislocating his neck.

4. "A SOLUTION TAILORED FOR YOUR NEEDS." Same think here: Make the header larger and don't make the subheader bold as well. Otherwise it's hard to know what you want your customers to focus on first.

5. Rergarding the prices: I think that the painpoint which you solve is that your templates are also offered with responsive resize. If I was you I would offer your different templates "for free" (that looks way better on your landing page) and if your customers need the same template in different sizes, you can charge them for that. This will make customers be dependent on your service after they have already worked with your template.

6. Implement an illustration for the "coming soon" pages. This makes it a little bit more vivid. Besides that give your customers a clear instruction what to do. Implement a button that says "back to home" or something like that.

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Cheers,

hey @zergione here are my thoughts:

1. I love that animation which comes up right away. Obviously you put the phone in the focus but your header "A journey to
   phone nostalgia" is therefore loosing priority. I would make the header way larger.

2. When you present the "Mr Nostalgic" Profile I wouldn't use a meme picture. This makes your website look very untrustwowrthy and a little bit sketchy. I would definitely recommend you changing that image.

3. I would expect the phone images at the "Mowned Time Explorer" section to move up while im scrolling dwon. This creates a nice parallax effect that works well with the website.

4. I would increase the size of the iphones at "Dynamic cell phones statistics" section by about 75%

5. My screen froze when I wanted to upvote a phone.

6. i would also remove the image of that weird looking face telling me that I need to be signed in to use this feature.

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Jorim

hey @threehourcoffe your're welcome: Here are my thoughts:

1. First impression is very positive. it looks clean, an reminds me of the apple website. Therefore I thought, your webiste would be more about the emojis rather than the "task management".

2. You are changing the way how people work on their tasks by giving emojis a very strong meaning but this meaning should be reflected or at least talked about on your website. In my eyes I would mention the emojis way earlier.

3. Don't use a bold font on "how to use what's new faqs about". I would recommend you using the regular size. otherwise people might loose track on what to focus on first.

4. I would use more illusrtation on the "whats new" section. Create a timeline which looks better than just rowing up Version changes.

5. A big tip that I want to give you is to stick with one type of emojis. On your main page you use apple emojis but then on the other pages i see some other emoji designs which is confusing and might be distracting from what you actually want to convey.

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Jorim

Hey @EtherPaul, here are my thoughts on your landingpage:

1. i like the animation the the right but it is very paced up and therefore distracting. If you want your website to be dynamic while not distracting the customers i'd slooooow down the animation a lot.

2. I'd increase the size of your headline. Besides that stick to the font that you re using throughout the landing page.

3. You are literally offerering 18 different ressources on your landing page. Your poor users might be super overwhelmed what to choose from it. I recommend you to make a "discover more" section so that you can split up the content a little bit more without loosing your customers attention.

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Jorim

hey @LeoNeo here are my thoughts:

1. What a beautiful illustration! I'm really curious where you've got that from.. please let me know! Besides that you have found a great color palette that creates a nice atmosphere and harmonic design throughout your landing page.

2. In my eyes you can give your content sections wayy more room than you currently do. Together with the logo, your title "Simple Ticketing; Easily manage and charge for your event." can be made much larger so that this is the only thing being visible when people open your site. The call to action button can be way larger as well. Although I like the shiny animation over the button, I would like to have it slowed down a little bit. it draws too much attention and distracts me from your content. Besides that I wouldn't just write "create". This might be confusing for people that don't know what exactly you are doing right away. I think it would be better if you would use : "CREATE EVENT" or "CREATE YOUR FIRST TICKET" or "CREATE YOUR TICKET"

3. Im somehow missing a top bar with your logo, further links and a CTA button. If i was you I would add this to your website. The upper link-bars are kinda common practice among website. You will face the danger of confusing your users due to not maintaining the fundamental top bar.

4. I would change the order of your benefits starting with " no signup required" , "participants list" and the other benefits in normal order after that.

5. What do you mean with "amazon" "google" etc. ? Are these your partners, users, investors? I would definitely emphasize on that but the position right next to the CTA button is not the right place for that. Make these logos way larger (maybe add 2 or 3 logos more) and spread it out above the "optinised needs" section.

6. I honestly don't think that the FAQ's deserve the second spot on your landing page. Instead of having some long text there, why don't you show photos of your product and explain how it works? Maybe do it like https://www.circushr.com/ I don't like their typography but I am just meaning the use of exemplary images. The best thing you could do is using a gif to make your product come alive a little bit more just like @threehourcoffe's website called http://www.llamalife.co/

Hope I was able to help you out with my feedback. If it was helpful feel free to vote my comment and to give me a follow. Also feel free to let me know when you applied some of my recommendations to your website. Please let me know where you have got your design inspiration from as I really like the colours and the overall deisgn of your landing page:)

Cheers,

Jorim

Great! Here are my thoughts:

1. Remove the grey frames from your images and utilize smooth drop shadows
   2.Use a top bar for facilitating navigation to your users even if your landing page is not that long. it's just kinda common practice.
2. I'd avoid using links that send you to facebook. This kinda feels sketchy to me but maybe I'm just the only one with that thought :)

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Cheers,

Jorim

Hey there, here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. I like your overall design but it could be a little bit more dynamic. is it piossible to animate your logo? @zergione did a great animation on his website https://mowned.com/ I recommend you checking that out.

Actually, despite that I think everything is spot on. Good job

Alright here we go:

1. Reduce the thickness of your text in the CTA. It shouldn't be bold but more like a regular size.

2. Your Landing Page uses a tad too many colors in my eyes. First you use black blue and tones of red but then its suddenly neon green. In my eyes you should change the colour of that neon green illustration and stick with the previous color palette.

3. Your price is kinda like a punch in the face for the user. It just suddenly stands there after scrolling down. I would honestly offer more individual and flexible prices based on the customers needs because this looks quite too preset.

Hope I was able to help you out with my feedback. If it was helpful feel free to vote my comment and to give me a follow. Also feel free to let me know when you applied some of my recommendations to your website. :)

Cheers,

Jorim

Hey @elmehdikamar, here are my thoughts on your landing page: I really like the UI therefore there is almost nothing to critique despite some little things:

1. Your FAQ's are clustering in the left half of the website. You give the text of your FAQs only 1/4 of total width which makes your text look longer and people will be frightened to actually read it.

2. You somehow build two headlines & co in one landing page lol. The first one is " Centralize product management and track time" and the second one is "One source of truth for all your productivity apps" I would advise you to decide yourself for just one. In my opinion I'd use the second one. The animations are more attractive and the visual message behind it is also a little bit more on point than the first one.

3. I can work more with the animation that shows me how it works rather than only the taskbite app showing me stuff that I don't understand yet because I didN#t read the explanation yet.

4. I'd put the pro plan in the middle. Its more central and doesnt look like a side option then

5. You might have to think about changing your main gradient color. In my eyes the transition from purple to some sort of navi blue doesn't really work out. Try it with a normal blue. Here are optional colors : Blue->#3D77FF Purple->#6B59AF

6. I just checked your colors with Adobe XD and my conclusion is that your colors are way to dark. Use likter tones that don't go too much into the black area of the color palette. Hope that my color codes were able to help you.

I hope that i was able to help you out with my thoughts. Don't forget to send me an upvote and a follow if you liked it. Remember, IndieHackers help out where they can ;P

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Jorim

Hey there, here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. When the things are flying in on the front page I noticed that the "background" objects behind the desktop screen where also flying in. I would seperatedesktop image from the background so that it makes more sense.

2. Your logo on the top bar is quite colorful but a little bit too colorful for me. I'd recommend you finding a logo designer that makes you a logo. Besides that I'd put the name next to the logo on the top bar so that everyone knows what this colorful "icon" is supposed to be :)

3. Why is only the "30" completely white in color when it comes to the pricing. I would definitely make the currency sign as well as the "per month" text white as well.

4. I would give your customers more choices. Remember: If they only have one choice they feel forced into the decision. if customers have more choices they will feel more self decisive which makes them feel more comfortable with making a decision.

5. I love the idea of the free trial but it comes wayyy to late. I need to scroll exactly to the bottom of the website in order to see the offer pop up. If I was you I would mention that a little bit earlier (maybe already in the pricing?)

I hope that i was able to help you out with my thoughts. Don't forget to send me an upvote and a follow if you liked it. Remember, IndieHackers help out where they can ;P

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Jorim

Hey @paulbot. You nailed the first impression due to an overviewable and well designed surface. Here are my thoughts how to improve the rest.

1. Why is the Ipad facing away from the person watching the page? Doesn't it make more sense to aim it towards the text which makes it feel way more inclusive ?

2. I would change the beginning of your subheader. If you write capable, most of the people will be like..."wait what?" they don't know that this is your business name and will be confused (at least that was my first thought). Either you make the first word "capable" italic so that people know that this is not a word but a name or you just leave it out and get right to the point.

3. Only one pricing option is quite dangerous. I would give your customers more choices. Remember: If they only have one choice they feel forced into the decision. if customers have more choices they will feel more self decisive which makes them feel more comfortable with making a decision. I would offer 3 categories from which one will just be you offering a free trial. But IT IS IMPORTANT that you give people self-determination. Im not quite sure about this but I think that studies have even shown that if businesses offer more payment choices, there will be more sales. It has something to do with the anker effect. Go check that one out.

4. LAst but not least: I would fill the end of the page with some navigational links as well. It is also beneficial for SEO purposes btw.

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Hey there, no worries. Here are my thoughts for your landing page:

1. The CTA button is not central alligned. it is shifted to the upper frage omf the button itself.

2. i would create a "card" where you list up your detailed pricing instead of just writing it on your page. This makes it look more professional.

3. I would already mention the features on the landing page right away fter the benefits and before the pricing. Nobody will search for it on the top bar.

4. I like the note that your prices are tax deductable. Why did you write it so small ? As I said create a pricing card which make things be wayy more overviewable. Here is a link https://www.google.com/search?q=pricing+card&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwjzk6yMttfqAhUNPewKHXpEBzUQ2-cCegQIABAA&oq=pricing+card&gs_lcp=CgNpbWcQAzIECAAQEzIECAAQEzIECAAQEzIECAAQEzIICAAQCBAeEBMyCAgAEAgQHhATMggIABAIEB4QEzIICAAQCBAeEBMyCAgAEAgQHhATOgQIABBDOgIIADoECAAQHjoICAAQBRAeEBNQuQVYowpg4hBoAHAAeACAAV6IAagDkgEBNZgBAKABAaoBC2d3cy13aXotaW1nwAEB&sclient=img&ei=Tz4TX7OwKI36sAf6iJ2oAw&bih=1174&biw=2133&rlz=1C1OKWM_deDE783DE783

5. If you need more design inspiration just check out dribbble.com or behance.com or printerest.com

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Hey @gordon thanks for reachinbg out. Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. The dropshadows are way to intense. Decrease opacity and increase blurring/radiation.

2. There is lots of potential to make the website a little bit more dynamic in terms of mini animations.

3. The right column of "Latest Content" called "Marketing for Success" is not aligned to the other columns next to it.

4. The submit button next to the email space should definitely be blue in the first place. If my mouse is hovering over the blue button it should get a little bit lighter blue but don't just cut away the filling. This is confusing to the users.

5. Delete the white frame from the CTA button on top. It doesn't fit to the design. Besides that implement a smooth light-blue drop shadow unter the CTA button :)

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Here you go:

1. Extremely impressed by the great implementation of the idea! I was very hooked when i saw the title from indie hacker and actually took the time to read your subheader. Good job guys!!!

2. Increase the desktop image equal to the width of the 3 columns following below.

3. Re tip no.2 :The dropshadows are a little bit too intense. Decrease opacity and increase blurring/radiation.

4. I really like your "3d" images that you have used. Where did you get them from? Besides that where did you get the inspirations from your website design in general it looks very attractive in my eyes.

5. I think that you can make the website more dynamic by implementing micro animations that will make the users experience more vivid.

But to be honest, you design and your originality was one of the best so far. Good job guys. Anyways, I hope that i was able to help you out with my thoughts. Don't forget to send me an upvote and a follow if you liked it. Remember, IndieHackers help out where they can ;P

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hey @swebdev, you are very welcome. Im sorry for the wait but there has been so much going on on this thread that its quite hard to keep up with the feedback. Anyways, here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. Your dropshadows behind the CTA buttons are too hard. Decrease opacity and increase blurring/radiation/smoothness.

2. Add shadows to your reviews otherwise the other applied shadows won't make any sense #continuity

3. Id remove the points on the main header. I know what you try to do with that but it honestly just stops the reading flow from the beginning on. users wont like that.

4. I would definitely reduce one of the subheaders. By adding a "+" it isnt just a subheader anymore. Its more like a text right under the main header which I would highly recommend to change. Focus on just one message that you want to convey with your subheader and bring the rest into the features. As I see some things in your subheader are repeated in the features.

5. I would't make the filling of the "Try live inteerview" button transparent. Use a color that is not as dominant compared to the major CTA button like smooth grey.

6. Bet isnt't it "Try Live-Interview"? Otherwise its hard to read.

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Hey @haltakov, here are my thoughts:

1. Your top header should definitely be written in bold text. Otherwise there is no text hierarchy which makes users confused what to read first. besides that it makes your website less crowded.

2. Create more space to your landingpage by having your image cover the full front page. It will give your landing page place to breathe.

3. Afterwards implement bold text to your headers. I recommend you checking out some principles of typography on youtube this might be helpful to you.

4. The links on your top bar are a little bit too squeezed together. Give them some more space and don't push them too far to the border.

5. Your Icons shouldn't be in the same color like your text. MAke Icons that clearly state what to read first. Check out http://shinypass.com/ and you will know what I mean. :)

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Hey there unfortunately the time for feedback is over. Follow me so that you can send your website link to me the next time i am doing this :)

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Jorim

Hey there. Thats good to know. Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. The main header can be wayy larger. I think you can even make it overlap with the furniture (but not too much)

2. Please please please implement a CTA button under your header such like "go to shop" "discover shop" etc. Its important that you guide your customers on your landing page which is not the case rn.

3. You products MUST appear on the landing page. As hard as it sounds but customers dont really care about "Who you arre "and "what your story is". Instead they want to see what you have to offer right away. It took me some time to actually find your products after clicking the "products" link on the navigation bar.

4. Here is an example on how you should structure your cobntent on the landing page:

• Image with header, subheader and CTA button (you almost did it only the CTA is still missing)

• Your products (a list of your product with a "discover more " button )

• Benefits of using your product

• FAQs

-about us (no text only images from you with less than 2 sentences)

5. Your illustrations in your blog are not matching with the overall color design of your website. I know that you have used them from undraw.co but you need to make some big color changes so that it fits to the design of your orange text you know. If you need help with that please feel free to let me know.

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here are my thoughts:

1. the whole website is extremely squeezed together with content. Give your website more place to breathe. Your title as well as the subtitle should use the whole screen first.

2. "Save 10 Million Per Year - That's Huge Saving" I dont think that is better if you let people decide themselves whether this is a huge saving. It sounds like you are just trying to sell them something if you tell them this so I would delete your coment on that.

3. Use less points under "who we are" obody takes so much time to actually read through 10 points.

4. Change the order of your content. Here is my recomendation:

-First: Imge with header and subheader,

-Second: Our clients (that creates trust)

-Third: Our products

-Fourth Who we are ( As hard as it sounds but customers dont really care about "Who you arre "and "what your story is". Instead they want to see what you have to offer right away. )

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Hey @Unknownworld, I like your landing page a lot. Its simplistic minimalistic and uses a nice color palette. Anyways, here are my thoughts:

1. It feels like your landing page is more like a "pitch" where you talk about the benefits of your product but Id expect to have a little bit more talk about FAQs, About You, etc.

2. Therefore I recommend using a top bar for navigational purposes.

3. The blue shape is in front of your iphone device. Is that planned ? It looks kinda weird though

4. When opening your page, users wanna see your app first and not only a part of it. Therefore I recomment you placing your device to the rights side while aligning the header and stuff to the left side. I have created a sketch for you that might be helpful. Here is the dropbox link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/v37szu0k75a63y5/motiveex.PNG?dl=0

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Hey buddy, youre welcom. Here are my thoughts:

1. There is too much content in the beginning. You should really only focus on a header and subheader plus the image.

2. The image needs a smooth dropshadow especially in the white-version

3. Leave all the adjectives "The Mighty Arch LinuxThe Powerful ZshThe Brave i3Windows ManagerThe Skilled tmuxThe Uncomparable Vim" away. IOt sounds weird. Just create cards where you explain with what you can work.

4. Your top bar could contain lavigational links to your content (benefits, tools, about us)

5. I think that there is lots of potential on your website. Just make sure that you kinda declutter your website from too much text and just spread out the content a little bit more so that there is place to breathe. This is called negative spacing by the way. Check out some information about that I am sure that it will help you.

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hey there! no problem its always a pleasure to help. Especially if I can help people like you working on their projects with passion :) Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. Please remove the tiny grey frames around your objects. It's not necessary since you use dropshadows.

2. Give your content a little bit more space to breathe. My impression is that things are a little bit too much stacked upon each other. In my eyes your header as well as your CTA plus the whole section in the black background deserves the whole display.

3. By making that section larger, you can finally implement a subheader. Where you can explain your mission in 1 or 2 brief sentences that will help your visitors understand what you do without even having to scroll.

4. The "Verify & Review Reputation" image to the right can be way larger. it is simply not possible to read whats in those cards.

5. What I can observe throughout your whole website is that your normal text is really tiny. Its hard to read. make it larger. It is totally fine to spread things a little bit out in order to improve readability.

6. Im not a native english speaker but dont you say "get an invitation" rather than "get an invite" ?

7. Your website has lots of potential to make things look more vivid by implementing micro animations. What do you think about the icecreams hovering a little bit up and down from that display? Like just a tiny bit up and down. The candy in the background as well (keep the parallax effect in mind due to it being in the background).

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Here are my thoughts.

1. Your dropshadows behind the image as well as cards are way too intense. Decrease opacity and increase blurring/radiation/smoothness.

2. Give your header andsubheader more space by stretching out your image and the search option thorughout the whole desktop

3. The transition from the image to the white background is very rough due to different background colours. I would recommend to change the image or just using svg objects.

4. Wait, you want to get money from people that post jobs? IsnÄt that very contraproductive to the user engagement? Especially if there isn't lots of traffic on your side yet, how can you charge people money for that? I definitely advise to build up sufficient traffic before requesting money for it.

5. Give each job post a little bit more space to breathe and add a small description towards it.

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Hey there, here you go:

1. great header size. Everything is super easy to read which I really like. many others are having difficulties with that so well done.

2. THe links in the top bar are larger than your CTA button...does that make sense? At least not to me :D it should be the other way around.

3. I really love that you have built in some sort of demo to try it out. This is very awesome. I would even bring that up to the front and either replace it with the two images or at least somehow combine it with them.

4. The reviews are taking way to much space. i would make a slide bar to the right so that people can see more reviews if they want to see more but right now you are using almost 2/3 of your page just for reviews. Thats a little bit too much in my eyes.

5. Remove the frame around the gradient image right in the beginning. You can see that the colors of the frame dont fit the colors of the filling which makes it look odd.

6. Neither would I use frames around your software images and reviews. Implement drop shadows. Its more in trend and gives your website more depth.

7. Pleaase change the button at "common questions". Remove the white frame, round them uop and round the edges from the "+"

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Here you go:

1. nice first impression. But why do you have two logos on top. That doesnt make sense to me.

2. use an image with a higher resolution. it looks somehow low quality otherwise.

3. reduce the size of "for kids between ages 6 and 13", remove the italic design and reposition it to somewhere where it makes more sense. (maybe as a subheader under the main header ?)

4. After scrolling down I really dont like the intense neon colors that you have used. Why dont you just stick with a white design? Colors should match to the colors you use in your header.

5. Apply smooth shadows under the images even if the shadows are not very visible people can somehow feel that there is more depth.

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Here you go:

1. increase size of header and subheader

2. there is too much text in the subheader

3. There are too many buttons. Focus on only one so that people know what you want them to do. Otherwise its just confusing from the beginning on.

4. increase the smootheness and opacity of your shadows while hovering over the cards. They are due to the background color almost not cvisible.

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Hey there, congrats to your launch. Here are my thoughts on your landing page.

1. i like the overall darkness of the website but in my eyes its even a little bit too dark. Especially when seeing the illustrations from undraw I would prefer being able to at least see a little bit of contrast to the background otherwise its kinda melting together and you just have a mass of black with some dark blue persons. That makes it very hard to see.

2. Please please please remove the purple shadow behind the CTA button. This is a big no-no. Apply a blue shadow in order to maintain consistency and logic. If I was using a flashlight shining onto a blue object with a black background, would it create a neon-purple shadow? No it wouldnt right ? :D

3. I don't like the tilt of the image right in the beginning.The objects in the background have 3d style with them due to shaping and shadowing. It doesn't make sense to put a 2d image in front of them. Either you dont tilt it or you have to build the image in 3d.

4. Put the CTA button under the subheader. People read the text from top to bottom. They wont read your header, then skip the CTA to read the subheader just in order to look up in order to see the CTA again. Create a reading flow.

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Here are my thoughts:

1. Create hover effect with the cards under "Intelligent and fully automated"

2. increase size of header and subheader

3. i can clearly see that you put the three boxes " student loands, bills, etc" over the head of the illustration yourself. The colors dont really match the image. I advise you to change them and rounden the corners as well.

4. The length of the "email" box is way too large. Dont use the etnire width.

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Hey @SilverChange, happy to hear that. Here are my thoughts on your landing page:

1. Great idea of being able to removing the headline once you have read it. Props to you for that.

2. Its very easy to access the teaching content. But the "landing" page doesnt really seem like a teaching page. First I thought it was a music website showing the faces of musicians. I recommend you using subtitles under each image so that people can know what these guys teach.

3. Some of the images inside the cards are a little bit squeezed together which looks unprofessional I recommend to edit them again.

4. It would make more sense if the images would already include some sort of clue what these people do. Just by seing them smile i dont know the benefit for me so that Im required to put more effort in by clicking on one of these people.

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Hey there. You are having an awesome website. Well done. Did you use any templates or did you design it yourself?

Despite your website already being very mature I will give you some of my remaining thoughts on it:

You are having a great positioning of your CTAs there is not to much text and a variety of well designed images. The onyl thing where I got a little bit overwhelmed is when you start talking about the AI and statistics/risks. From there on text length increases and it becomes more like a newspaper article with interactive elements. Make sure to stick with the most essential information. Despite that there is nothing that I can give you feedback on. Just focus on text reduction and you should be fine.

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Here you go:

1. I really enjoyed the animation in your hero section. Why don't you also implement that type of animation in your other content sections as well. i can definitely imagine seeing the hands with the puzzle flying in from each side.

2. The black background behind the code is (for me) a little bit to strongly contrasted. Make the black color more transparent or simply just use a lighter grey tone. This will make the code feel more included to your overall design.

3. Delete the "read more " option when buying a coffeee. it is not necessary as the text is not even that long.

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Here are my thoughts:

1. Your website is still a little bit empty yet. Talk more about what is the difference compared to other donation platforms.

2. implement more pictures like the one in your hero section. Show people some emotional images that move their hearts and talk more about the situation in which these kids need to live in as well as talk about how exactly you will use their donations.

3. When people are donating money they want to have 1000% transparency. if you wont be able to offer that nobody will donate via your website.

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Hey there, here are my thoughts:

1. I think that you are leaving out lots of valuable space of your website just to keep the mainheader on the page 24/7. Only using one half of the website to actually display content is not only uncommon but also very unoverviewable. Remember: Each pixel of your landing page is some expensive real estate. If I was you I would make the whole thing scrollable but just with more CTA buttons where people have the chance to leave their emails if they want to. pitch.com is a good example for design that I want to recommend you.

2. How much does it cost? if you dont mention that people will get either sceptical or will think that your product is for feree. If so you need to mention that.

3. Stop only focussing on your features. Tell your customers instead what the benefit is. They will surely be able to kinda guess their benefits by seeing the features but why dont you just slam thetop 3 benefits ritght in their faces in the first place?

4. I recommend using drop shadows behind your images

5. Use micro animations so that your images slightly move with the content while scrolling.

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Here you go:

1. The content inside the desktop is barely readable. How can you convince sopmebody to use your product if they cant even see what your product is . You need to make the content wayy larger.

2. Create a dropshadow behind the pictures as well.

3. The dropshadows that you have already applied are way to strong. Reduce opacity and increase radiation/smoothness.

4. The card next to "Reports made easy." is way to rounded. All your buttons are made with no rounded edges but all of a sudden you have huge edges on cards like these. Be careful with consistency of your design.

5. You definitely wanna put the pricing on your landing page as well. Be transparent and open instead of trying to hide your pricingon another page.

6. Implement images of your team in the about section. Make sure to keep the text a bit shorter.

7. Anything else looks good to me so far.

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Hey there! Here you go:

1. I recommend maintaining in your design pattern. Especially with your typortgaphy. Having your subheader in a different font than the whole website might make it stand out more but it also breaks the harmony and the flow in my eyes. Besides that I would reduce the length of your subheader. it feels more like a text than a subheader.

2. There are in my eyes too many CTA's on the front page. What do you want your users to do first? Watching a video? Buying it for 15$ or checking stuff out on product hunt? Focus on one thing. In my eyes the video button is not necessary because the video should play it self automatically after scrollibng down.

3. Instead of using videos I recommend you implementing GIFs. The effort to click a button to see what your product can will be erased and customers can automatically see what you do without any effort.

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Well, I'm sorry but I can't review your platform without signing onto a service which I don't know about. Therefore the only feedback that i can give you is: create a landing page and let me know once you need feedback for it.

Cheers Jorim

Alright so you will receive sort of an answer from me:D

1. You want to be a bank right? Therefore your website has to look like its 100% safe and serious. This is very very important. Therefore I would distance myself from the Startup-landingpage-design and would recommend you checking out other banking websites from fintech startups like N26.com

2. I would take grey as a color for your text.

3. The credit card is empty at the spot where the fingerprint (i guess) should be. This is not really making sense. The card itself has to be perfectly designed from the beginning on. Check out dribbble.com there are thousands of designers already having designed a creadit card with adobe xd etc.

4. Use exemplary names for the card. Dont just write code and name just use random numbers so that it looks more authentic

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Hey there here are my thoughts:

1. The gif in the computer display should be a little bit sped up.

2. Drastically increase the size of the CTA button because its way too small

3. I can se that you use shadows but these are almost impossible to see. Therefore adjust your shadow axis (X+10 and Y+10 maybe) besides that bake the shadow smoother by increasing radiation

4. Id defenitely want to see the pricing on the main page.

5. make the enterprise version "on request" otherwise people will be scared to see such high prices.

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