Landing Page Feedback July 14, 2020

Send me your landing page and I'll give you tips 😎

Josh Ternyak @JoshTernyak

Comment a link to your landing page below 👇 and a short sentence describing it and I'll give you tips and feedback on how it can be improved.

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    mergefly.com - a platform for reviewing and merging GitHub pull requests.

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      1. Add a testimonial section
      2. Move the videos showing the platform in action to the header instead of the cool bug image to show users how it works right away
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    https://www.focusedtodo.com/ - A minimal to-do list app with a clean interface

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      You could also add a testimonial section

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        Will be adding a testimonial suggestion once I collect a few good testimonials.

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      Instead of saying "Focused" in the header, say "Finally, a to-do list app that has all the useful features you need to stay productive."

      This will catch people's attention much more than if you just say "Focused"

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        Focused is the name of the product so I had to mention that upfront. I will add a more descriptive subtitle or byline.

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    Https://packbrand.co - packaging design without designers

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    I Want To Read More - help bloggers make their blog more interesting by asking readers for feedback.

    Thanks a lot for taking the time :)

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    https://whereami.dev - A tracker app for people who undergo challenges like 100daysofcode, the initial focus is only on this challenge.

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    https://tangibleplugins.com/products/lifter-elements/ - A WP plugin that allows you to design your LifterLMS site with the page builder you already know and love (Elementor).

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      I recommend speeding up the youtube video so people can see the tool in action in less time

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    wescribe.com - WeScribe helps team leaders keep everyone on the same page about the details that matter most.

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      When the site first loads, the text that changes every 2 seconds is delayed and doesn't show up right away. Take a look into making it appear much quicker.

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        Thanks for the feedback @JoshTernyak!

        It's always good to remember to check these types of experiences for slower internet connections (which we didn't do well enough here). I'll work on getting a better first load experience built-out.

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    Hey Josh. Thanks for your help :)

    buildfaster.co - HTML themes made easy as pie 🥧

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      I recommend:

      1. Guest blogging on coding blogs (big and small) talking about how you build your themes and what you learned. This will get lots of attention and visitors to your theme resulting in more sales
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        Thanks! I’ll definitely consider this in the coming weeks for updates.

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          Of course, glad to help

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    https://botondveress.com it's my personal site and it's still in progress but any feedback welcome :)

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    Super excited to join the landing page game.

    I've a side project running on Notion, excited to hear your feedback!

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    It's a lead page and would like to get all the bad points in front of me. please share everything that are bad on this lead page.

    Thanks for your time.

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    My landing page is my home page - www.monibooks.com
    Thanks

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      The image on the left of the section "Keep track of your numbers" is squished.

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        Thank you for the feedback.

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      1. Add a "Get Started" button to the header
      2. Add testimonials
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    Hi, Josh. I have two pages, feel free to choose one or do both and thank you for your valuable time and help.

    https://boostlane.com/help/shopping/ | A Social Platform dedicated to Online Shopping

    https://boostlane.com/help/selling/ | A Social Platform dedicated to e-Commerce with Support Services to help Boost Sales and Reduce Costs

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      I recommend hiring a designer to improve the design of the site. And then hiring a front-end web developer: joshternyak.com/services to implement the designs.

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        Thank you for the feedback

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    Hi @JoshTernyak spacedoo.com - Curated and actionable growth hacks delivered to your email.

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      You should add credibility. For example you could say, "Join 1,243 others who want actionable growth strategies."

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        Thanks, definitely will do that!
        Is there anything I can do for you?

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          Yes, do you have a blog in the home or sleep industry? Or do you know anyone that does?

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            sorry, Josh, I don't

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