I'm pretty bad at landing pages. So, take off the gloves and let me have it - I promise you won't hurt my feelings! I feel like this starts out well but gets worse and worse. Anyone have some good examples or collection of examples out there I can steal from?
Looks cool. I have checked your sendhoney website and its really design amazing. I'm working on Glove reviews project that hosted on WordPress and I want to make the same design for my blog, you can see here https://keeperspro.com/cheap-goalkeeper-gloves/
@unremute @prakis better than dripping honey?
https://ibb.co/3dRhTVK
Looks much better than dripping honey.
I'd say yes!
I landed on the page, first thing that gets my attention:
your main catch phrase text is black, right on top of that dripping honey, and it is very difficult to read. There is no contrast. It also looks like it was not on purpose and there is some html error.
Oh that was intentional! Here I was thinking I was being brilliant (bahaha!) but it's just an ode to my inept design ability. Lord have mercy I might need to pay someone to design a landing page....and everything else in my life. I'm questioning my outfit today...Thanks for the feedback! I do appreciate that!
Cool idea. I like it. Maybe frame it with "Peace of Mind" & Give more.
Peace of mind! DUH. I was thinking 'set it,...and forget it!' (infomercial anyone?) but peace of mind and spreading smiles is a definite winner over that value prop
That domain name is easy to remember and sounds perfect but the UI/UX is bad. To be frank it looks a bit ugly to me. That huge honey splashing image looks odd.
General idea is if you can't get a perfect landing page then just get a simple ready to use template.
Thanks =)
do you have any favorite spots for finding templates?
A builder like unicornplatform.com, cruip.com, or landen.co will do wonders for you :)
I would completely redesign it, try to get better imagery as well.
The goal is to make them remember the times they didn't send or the time they did and the benefit they got from it.
That's great feedback - remember the times they're heralded for sending flowers - I like that.
The idea is great but the UX is not. Redesign it in where you can have the UI latest trends. I would suggest a minimalist design, as I think users only wants the functionality and how friendly the website is.