Sensible Living - Am I speaking the user's language yet?!?

I recently updated the web format of what had previously been a Google Doc that was shared with friends and family, called 'Sensible Living'. A huge thank you to the community for providing thoughtful, constructive, and concrete feedback on the v1 of my landing page! It feels like it is in a much better spot now (i.e., not just a Word doc copied and pasted into a website ;D).

That said, I still am not sure if the basics are clear: 1) What is being offered; 2) Why it is beneficial to the user; and 3) What does the user do next. This all feels clear to me, but I am living within the system, and so cannot be an unbiased observer.

The URL is https://tsdventures.co/sensible-living

Without giving you any upfront context, I am so curious how you interpret what is on offer :D

Thank you for your feedback and perspective! I deeply appreciate your support.