Sensible Living - Is it clear what is on offer?

A few nit picks.

• Too much text, like wow.
• Your header, has a good amount of text but it feels crammed, I add some hierarchy and have a large headline and smaller support sentences
• Light blue with a white background is a bad UX and UI choice, it makes it harder to read over time.

All in all, I would research some modern design trends and try to make your landing page friendlier. You want to invite people to stay, not make them read an essay before they sign up.

Hello Teddy.
I have bad eyesight and the contrast of the colours (cyan on white background) makes it difficult for me to read your text. As I can’t activate Reader mode on your page, I had to copy and paste your copy.. into word (sorry).

I am confused between this page that sounds more like a life coaching page and the financial consultancy the other pages of your website are promoting.
That said, I’ve bookmarked your page https://tsdventures.co/marketmap - very interesting.

Hi @tdaiell,

The UI looks clean,

1. I would suggest making it even clear i.e. what you offer within the second/third line of your page.
2. Honestly, apart from the first section, the remaining part of the page looks more like a word document.
3. I would suggest you add an image for each section and keep the text to 2-3 lines per section
4. Maybe you can check this website for guidance https://matterapp.com/

All the best.

Yes, it seems to fall into the 'Self-Help', or what I like to just call the 'Help' category. Here's what it seems you are offering:

• Newsletter
• Patreon sign-up
• Coaching Services