Hi guys, we just launched our landing page and would really love to get your feedback, also would be great if you can tell me what did u understand from it and if our message is clearly communicated. here is the link
https://contentstream.webflow.io/
I'd use 'early access' rather than 'Early-Access'. Best of luck!
Thanks a lot Pluglet, I will consider your suggestion
That background is very distracting, especially the redish / pink part.
The value prop is very clear but agree with an earlier comment that the copy is too large. I think the "Why ContentStream?" section is very weak and frankly not even needed. Anyone who feels the pain will immediately resonate with this and sign up for early access.
In the "get early access" flow, consider providing an email entry field in a much more prominent manner. Have the user enter their email and then take them to the Google Form. Otherwise, you might lose some people who want to just give you their email address for now.
Good luck - this is much needed.
Hi, thanks a lot for your feedback,
concerning the copy font size, yep, I got that comment multiple times, I will definitely change that asap
concerning the why ContentStream section, do you think it would be needed if something is added to make it stronger? The reason I included it, is to expand more about what features we are already/planning to offer
Concerning the early access part, totally agree with you, but would love to hear your thoughts on why I made it this way -> so, I could keep the email form directly on the landing page, but that - as you mentioned - will make it easy for everyone to drop their email, even if they are not really feeling the pain, they may just want to know what is out there, that could give us as a product team false positive that our product is needed and people are queuing up for it. However, if we keep a small and justified friction, then whoever goes through it, is indeed a customer who cares about the product, that will optimize our effort in addressing the needs of only those guys and optimize the product easily and quickly based on the feedback of those who feel the pain.
Of course, I might be wrong, and this is why I would love to hear your thoughts about it
Hey @belalamin Apologies, just seeing this now.
On Why ContentStream, I think it really depends on who you are targeting and at what stage you are. My take is that you are trying to find your early adopters (like me) and we don't need much convincing. I would rather just sign up and start exploring than read through the entire website. For more mainstream users, they might need more convincing yes. In which case, this section might be needed. Independently, I do think it needs a lot more improvement.
On early access, this is an age old debate. My opinion is that you have a spectrum of users with different intent, and it's better to at least get their email address than not get it at all. For example, I am a potential customer but did not enter my email address as soon as I saw the wall of questions. My usual approach is to ask for the email and then present a form if I want more information. You can always weed out the non-serious users later.
I browsed through your site again and have a few comments:
Hey @belalamin, great work on the landing page, I notice a few minor issues though
I'm on a 27' inch 4k screen and the landing copy looks way too big to me, maybe consider having a look at that?
In the
Why ContentStreamsection of the website the text seems a little uneven (Uppercase/Lowercase) and maybe you can make it a little more consistent.You can maybe check out https://responsively.app/ to check it out in different screen sizes, great content though, and I could understand what the product is clearly.
Hi, Thanks a lot for your feedback, I totally agree with you that there is that very big font, I will fix it, I know the cause
I will also check the text of the Why section, thanks a lot for your time and feedback, really appreciate it
Looks great!
Just a few things from a non-tech perspective - could consider "follow us on Twitter" vs "find" for a more direct CTA. I'm not sure if in the "Why ContentStream" section the bottom left panel says "Never Miss aday" (not sure if it was intended to be "Never Miss a Day"). Also, bottom right panel could consider capitalizing the "y" in "your".
Thanks a lot, your comments are indeed on spot and I will consider them for sure
Hi Belal! Thanks for sharing your landing page. Just after a quick scan, I really like the copy for the first heading. It gives me solid insight into what the tool is for. However, I think the green word "instantly" should be linked to your info/signup page. Or simply redesigned in a different way. I also recommend an infographic that shows the basic function of the software. For example, you could have an article with an arrow or animation in a social post. Overall great work, excited to see how launch goes
Thanks a lot Ian for your valuable feedback. I will definitely consider it. about the launch, here we are on twitter, your support is very appreciated https://twitter.com/ContentStreamAI