Share your landing page and I'll tell you how I'd improve it.

Hey Stephan, here's my first impressions https://www.loom.com/share/b9e340f012cc418aa48b6c1d3a43916e

Summary:

• Too much text, cluttered
• Copy is not clear
• Missing a true CTA, the one button I see on the page takes me to something irrelevant
• Improve the design of the rankings sections for readability and to give yourself more landing pages for SEO

Here you go David https://www.loom.com/share/cabc8c08695c412a874aef4eb5804fa7

• Love the neon on black aesthetic
• That demo gif is perfect
• Get a better domain name
• bi-line should focus on no-code not "4-simple steps"
• Add a "powered by" at the bottom to drive traffic/link-juice back to the main domain.
• Collect my email.

Here you go Shekh https://www.loom.com/share/7b1fb848c30b45a08f96e96c38335cec

Summary:

• Header & bi-line are confusing, I would reword them like this

Get hired for more freelance gigs

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• AB Test with different CTA button colors. I think a red would contrast well with the rest of your website and could drive more clicks

• Hire an English-native copy writer or copy editor to go over this whole landing page. There are many grammar mistakes and confusing sentences.

Here you go https://www.loom.com/share/2bc6bd7307f64d5eb95fb65b619037dd

Summary:

• Photos were too close up, I thought this was just a community not a physical product at first. Get photos (or even better video) of fitness models training with your product.
• Fix your CTA button, I had to click 3 different buttons just to get to an email form.
• Testimonials should be higher up.
• Product screenshots aren't great.
• Text should contrast better with background for readability.

Here you go Gintas https://www.loom.com/share/d00f62bcb15f471cba9f97adfb7fbd4c

Summary:

• Improve contrast between text and background for readability.
• Simplify bi-line.
• 200 visitors is not enough. You need more high quality traffic.

P.S. I did a live redesign of your header, stick to the end of the video for the result.

Here you go Tobi https://www.loom.com/share/da969d3a67c34db39b81bda9fd2c56d4

Summary:

• Text is too small, hard to read
• Copy is confusing, has grammar mistakes
• A personal website should have more focus on projects you've completed, check out https://nathalyn.com/ for a great example
• The picture of you should be higher definition (or just make the photo smaller so it doesn't look blurry).

Here you go https://www.loom.com/share/bf8c2978759a48dcae13c809d8f7cd9b

• Header is not clear
• Animation is both distracting and hard to read
• Bi-line text should contrast more with the background
• CTA that opens a popup can be simplified, just make the CTA an email signup form to begin with
• More social proof sooner

https://www.loom.com/share/2776c41367a0415fb36f6f8cd951563f

• Make it clear that your CTA is a buy button
• Clean up that popup, it's overwhelming
• Add photos to your testimonials

https://www.loom.com/share/6587b5c10c874f86b7e6a9b07dae0f00

• Your copy is too long, cluttered, and could be clearer.
• CTA has the right idea, but has UI problems. Form field looks more like a button than the actual button (and the hint text is partially hidden).
• Get rid of elements which distract from your message. ie background image, navigation.

Looks like I've had a lot of replies this evening. Since it's already night where I am I'll do my reviewing in the morning. 🔥