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Share your landing page here

Hello fellow indie hackers,

Share your landing page here so the community can give you feedback.
Oh, and while your at it, check out my landing page

on February 5, 2021
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      Hey, nice landing page. There are some negative space that's taking up space and your CTA is not visible in the above-the-fold section. You can make that slight change for better conversions.

      Also, I wrote about a similar example a while back in my blog (see hypefury). https://marketingmetrics.io/blog/how-successful-indies-customized-their-copy-for-conversions

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        Thank your for your feedback! You are right about the CTA. Thanks for sharing your blogpost, it seems very helpful!

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      Hey Paola,
      Nice website. I was going through your website and tried to login with twitter,
      I authorize my account and after that this message appears "Loading Data , This can take ..."
      Have a look at this

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        Thanks :) Yeah, we will work on making that process faster, so you don't have to wait that long! Thanks for letting me know

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        Hi Eider! Thanks a lot for your feedback! We are definitely going to take your comments and suggestions into account.

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      The privacy pop-up is an unnecessary interruption in the UX. This is a bug turn off for new sites where the user's attention span is already very little. You can anonymize IP in Google analytics to avoid this pop-up for a better user experience.

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        Thanks for your feedback. What do you mean "anonymize IP in Google analytics"?

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          GA has an option to anonymize IPs to avoid GDPR popups. But if you're using other analytics tools then you might need that popup.

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            Never heard about it. Thanks a lot

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      Hey, I assume English is not your native language? If it is, disregard the following suggestions.
      "Private your email", should that be something more like, "Privatize your email" or maybe "Hide your email"? And maybe "Generate new Bump emails with one click is pretty easy!" should be "Generate new Bump emails with one easy click!" instead?

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        Thank you for your feedback

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        Thanks for your feedback

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    https://magiclogin.net

    Passwordless login :) About to launch in a week or two, happy to receive any feedback! I'll probably increase the pricing of the cheapest plan to $9..

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      Awesome product, amazing website, clear to the point.

      When I am going to launch a SaaS, currently busy with something else.
      I am probably going to use your service. I hate making accounts. According to the philosophy of product-led growth, platforms most often have a higher exit rate because you slow down your customers' WOW moment.

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      Good website. I think you can collect information about what plan users want

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      I don't often see .net domains these days, but magiclogin is a nice name.
      I really like your landing page: clean and #262b40 goes well with that orange color.
      Just an idea I got when I checked your website: I think you should put a "Email me when it's ready" CTA button instead of the "Why offer magic button?".

      It's just my opinion, but you could test it to see if it effects your conversion rate. I usually put my call to action up front before any button.
      I understood your product from the title + sub title, so if I would be your target audience, I would sign up right away, wouldn't need much explanation. I would read the description when it's time for me to actually pay for it/put it into use.

      Those were my two cents, but as I said I like your website! Good luck Guido! :)

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    Here we go.
    Choose the one suits you best.

    Personal
    Michaelandreuzza.com

    Thanks for the opportunity!

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      Hi, all three of your sites are excellent! However, with WickedBlocks, it would be better if the user could see an iframe rather than a png preview.

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        Hey Sidth.

        I am working on that. Actually, I am redesigning the sites so is possible to use on bright or dark mode, that is on the roadmap.

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      A critical test for any website is the 10 seconds test, what users get from it in first 10 seconds. Your headline is very abstract to understand in the first 10 seconds.

      If you have a closed beta, you should mention that before asking people to opt-in. This requires double permission from the user which is very difficult to achieve.

      It's difficult to get sign-ups without offering value. In this case, the value is not clear.

      Let me know how you are doing on converting users on this page. This can be a very good case study.

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        Thank you! We are changing the copy to make it clearer, let’s see!

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          that's great to know.. ATB

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    Product:
    https://owlocr.com

    Personal, real low effort, lol:
    https://urtti.com

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        Haha, small world. Making changes continuously so good to get feedback along the way

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    https://loopit.dev/

    Come to our site and try it! Any feedback is welcome! Tell us any place you wanna go but you have no idea how to play :)

    landing-page.png

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    Hi,
    Thank you for everyone's valuable time. I would appreciate your feedback about my product: https://textsniper.app/

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      Hi, Your landing page is good. The only bug I found was in the footer
      It says

      Privacy PolicyRelease Notes
      
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    formtraq.com - website form analytics

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        Thank you for the suggestions!

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      Great aesthetics, and visual pleasing color composition. Here's some UI / UX Feedback using bubbles:

      https://app.usebubbles.com/bJGx4Ew1BJPP1Swzt3ekgd/awroa-app-ux-feedback/

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        Great insight. Would work on it : )

        Thanks.

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      Beautiful. Explains everything nicely. Use cases, demonstration, purpose.

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    Recently redesigned the page https://blanq.io

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      This design looks good but you should also test if you can get more conversions by just selecting one pain point and focusing on that in the subheading (something that differentiates you from the herd). Once you get the reader's attention you can elaborate on additional benefits.

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        That's a good idea. Thanks, will incorporate this.

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        Hey, could you help me fix it? I am struggling to create a sharp image. I will pay you for your work.

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        Hey, thanks a lot. Will take note.

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      You are having a lot of negative space(white space) in the above the fold area. You should give out more details in the top section to increase conversions. Right bow it talks just about startup news but people won't know what to expect in such news as there are already a lot of newsletters in this space.

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      Contrary to what others say, I actually like the empty white space (Im a minimalist fan ;). However, I did scroll down to see if there was any more information or example newsletters and was a bit disappointed to see that was it. Perhaps add some historical links to see whats in the newsletter.

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      I think you should add a background picture because the right part feels empty right now

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      Hey, interesting service. Here's your UI / UX Feedback feedback for you!

      https://app.usebubbles.com/i35VMSsxd3YVnodwJS2BsF/avy-ux-feedback

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      I like this landing page but if you specifically target some groups like developers, managers, product people for mentoring and create separate landing pages that'll build better connect with the readers instead of looking generic.

      People love something customized for them. On the homepage you can simply focus on your most common audience.

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        Great feedback, thank you for the insight.

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    www.wxllspace.com - just a countdown page, but I have 3 other info pages linked in the header. Be brutal- i want to perfect this before my launch.

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      I like it, however it seems to load very slowly. I don't think this is a problem with my internet because sites like Github load pretty fast.

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    Okay. Here's a new landing page for my philosophy-by-email education project, Looking for Wisdom. Any thoughts would be hugely appreciated.

    https://study.lookingforwisdom.com

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    Hi everyone!
    Would love some feedback on — https://www.vocado.at/ 🙏🏻

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      🤩 So good! Lovely choice of font. However pricing tables a bit big, don't you think?

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        Thank you for the feedback.

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    Hello everyone,
    just updated my landing page:

    https://www.decisimo.com

    Would love to read any feedback.

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    Finished our new website last week! Paperless.io
    What are you guys thinking?

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      As previously pointed out, I noticed similar with the name. Felt like I'd gone quite way down the page before the mention of Optimule, then had a moment of "oh, that's the name".

      On your FAQ where it mentions contacting Andrew directly - I would avoid sounding like a one man operation (even if that's the case), but emphasise the direct/personal support - e.g. along the lines of all customers have a direct support contact, responsive personal service etc.

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        Yeah, I definitely agree about the name visibility. Im working on it.

        Good call. Ill update that portion of the faq.

        Cheers!
        Andrew

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      Neat!

      • I'd put the name of the service in the top-left (with the logo) otherwise it's not visible above the fold and doesn't stand out. Always better to help people remembering your name, right?
      • the CTA button could stand out a bit more IMO. Using the orange of the logo, for example? The sign up button could use this as well
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        Thanks! I changed the color already.

        About the logo/name, I designed it with Mac Preview, and to add the name Id have to use something a bit more sophisticated like gimp. But I just watched my first tutorial on designing a proper logo, so hopefully itll be updated soon! Cheers

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          Nice.
          I wouldn't bother designing a name logo; a simple font can be enough. (for example I've done exactly that on https://www.pgtop.dev/)

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      I like it! The only thing I would reccommend is either shortening the copy under the "timeline" feature, or make the font bigger. For me it was bit difficult to read on first glance.

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        Yes, that text really is too small. Will have a think about making it shorter - thanks!

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    Hey folks,
    I love your feedback on my landing page:
    https://socialdeck.io

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        Thanks for highlighting those point.
        It's really appreciable.

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        Hey Gabriel, thanks for the feeback.

        Yes, I don't know why embeded Airtable are so slow right now. Otherwise, good advices, I'm going to implement some of them.

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      Im on firefox, and it seems the "availability" buttons render strangely as if they are all float left.

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        Thanks! Pushed the fix, should look better now.

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      Beautiful artwork!
      I find that it doesn't really explain how this will work / what will be different from other similar tools.
      Maybe the sections could use more distinct background colours to me it seems like everything is floating on a white page. But it may be just me.

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        You're right. Thanks! I should work on the explaining part. Yes i've got that feedback before as well. Needs some work.

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      Cool idea - would look into site performance. Images were really slow to load for me.

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      Looks cool!

      I was slightly put off by the first two sections:

      • the first one looks "washed out"
      • the second one has loads of text (people don't read)

      But the following sections are really nicely done with simple but pleasing artwork. And it's super clear.

      Maybe it's just me but I wouldn't focus on the drink-game aspect (it's the first sentence) as this may reduce the user-base.

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        It's washed because otherwise the black text and the app store buttons would not be visible/stand out. It needs to have contrast, that is most of the websites has a black shade or white wash on the title background image.

        I moved the second section lower with the "loads of text" :D
        Thx!

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            Long story short:
            Apple doesn't allow DRINKING GAMES anymore in the app store. But they are so strict, that even if there nothing about drinking in the app, but there is something on your website, they reject the app during the review process. So the solution is: on our official website: www.locospartygame.com there is nothing about drinking, but... on a 3rd party website, that we have nothing to do with... there is.

            Is this stupid?
            Yes.
            Do I hate Apple?
            ... guess.

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              Ahah! insane.

              But FYI I landed on .com via a search so you may want to use your neat .net landing page on there as well (without the mentions to drinking)

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          Makes sense. I'll download the game and try it next time I'm with friends :)

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            Great, have fun! 🤗🦄⭐✨

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    https://moogle.cc - convert any email into a webpage for easier bookmarking, sharing, and discussions. Make emails social again.

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      Hello, here's some quick UI / UX Feedback. Hope it helps :)

      https://app.usebubbles.com/wpBmobCEvGjkkv2AuGEGDw/tiwik-ux-feedback/

      have a great day!

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        Thank you for the Feedback :)

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    htttps://www.reschedule.app

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    This is the landing page for a course/info product that I launched in January.

    👉 Link to landing page

    It's got a 24.43% conversion rate from landing page to Gumroad, which further has a 20% conversion rate to sale.

    So the final landing page conversion rate is 4.89% with which I'm very pleased!

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    Excited to hear your feedback

    VenturesList

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        Hi,
        Thanks for the feedback.. I will follow those.

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    Love seeing everyones landing page here. Lots of good inspiration...

    Here's mine: http://tweetpop.app/

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    https://rentagon.co
    Simple landing page for a peer-to-peer renting app, to measure user interest. I'd love to hear some feedback. TIA!

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    https://swoopnow.com/
    Swoop’s customizable and easy-to-implement auth solution removes the need for passwords while adding a multi-factor layer of security.

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      Very cool service. I made some UI / UX feedback for you, and hope it helps!

      https://app.usebubbles.com/ofQRGpyzUdFXGcUHLv8REh/swoop-ux-feedback/

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        Gabriel: I appreciate you taking the time to give such considerate feedback. I'll be sharing your thoughts directly with our team today as we review improvements. 🙌

        Let me know how I can be of service to you!

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      Loved the landing page.

      I loved the up arrow cursor to scroll back to the top. I will think about adding this too, seems like an easy win. The use of colour was great and especially liked the green in the footer - wish this was visible earlier on in the landing page experience.

      Here are some improvement points:

      The font you used for the small text under the CTA is hard to read. In combination with the font size, I had to squint a little bit to read it properly and my vision is good!

      "See it in action" CTA text colour may need to contrast with the blue background colour more.

      Copy text is clever and snappy. The only part that I questioned was "Login That Looks Like You". Maybe it was just me but I found that one harder to resonate with. Maybe someone else could chime in with their opinion on this.

      Well done and all the best.

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        Sub: Fantastic feedback. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts and reading the copy! I've shared your comments directly with our copywriter and she was delighted. All the best. Let me know how I can be of service to you!

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          My pleasure. Feel free to connect on Twitter if you're active: @SubDeveloper.

          If you're interested in creating a following on Twitter, you can check out my SaaS too :) https://tweetpop.app/

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    www.dancingpandapal.com - I am on the verge of launching my first paid product and I'd love any feedback on my landing page and website. It's about 80% done - have a few more tweaks to make, based on other feedback I've received. Thank you!

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    https://fastur.com

    Self serve ad platform. Let advertisers pay you to post an ad on your site using a form on your site.

    Site is currently in beta. Offering 50% off to anyone who wants to try it out.

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      are you offering beta to people? because I couldn't find any CTA by scanning through the page

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        Thanks for pointing that out. the entire payment process was in the dashboard.

        I have now added a gumroad payment form on the landing page with a notification about the beta on the top right.

        If you want to try it, you can use the code beta to get the 50% off.

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      You have great writing skills but you must keep in mind you are speaking to ordinary people like me 😊

      For them, the headline will sound cryptic- maybe you can deliberate about getting rid of words like "deliberate"

      If you find this review useful please help me by reviewing my blog: https://marketingmetrics.io/blog/content-framework

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    https://app.logicsheet.co/

    It's a simple Github Pages site. Trying to keep it informative.

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      Is this an open source project?

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    https://www.everypagehq.com Open to any suggestions! It took us ages to realise putting the examples at the top was a huge win which came from an IH user and im sure theres loads more 👀.

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      Are you specifically targeting the developers. If not, there is simply too much of jargons for non-developers.

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        Ye it is at the moment. Any areas in particular where you think I could make some things easier to understand?

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          You may explain in FAQs or other sections what you mean by exceptional SEO and drag-and-drop again abc

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    We are Explorers! We uncover Products, Services and The News
    boostlane.com

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      It's a little confusing, but here's the overall feedback:

      https://app.usebubbles.com/tw62B3TZVhxJb3rxM3FHHZ/boost-lane-ux-feedback/

      hope it helps!

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        Thanks for taking time to give this valuable feedback. I will use it to improve how the value proposition is communicated.

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    surveysays.app

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      You are providing a great service but the value-prop is not clear at the first glance. The headline is most important element in the copy that drives the reader to go to the next line. "practical developer hiring" doesn't immediately make sense. You can test this out with people who are doing hiring and see what they understand by the term practical hiring. It's best if you use their language by speaking with them.

      Hope this helps!

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        I think you have a point, Subro. 💡Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

        There are two main things I aimed at encoding in the title:

        1. Show the value: one can validate the "practical" developer skills of their candidates.
        2. Handle the objection that it is usually time-consuming/

        There's likely a better title for this. But going through multiple iterations that's the best I got. Maybe "Developer hiring that saves time" would do better? 🤷‍♂️

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          This sounds better but sometimes people who are to use your product don't realize they have a problem. If that's the case you have to be careful with your words so that they are convinced that this will be useful for them.

          If you have already done some user research to validate that this problem is on the top of a recruiter's mind, the copy should work fine. If not, you have to go much deeper to modify your headline.

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    https://www.hostagefund.com
    I'm pretty happy with the design, but I feel like the copy is so-so :)

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    https://www.curabase.com

    I don't know how to immediately if it communicates the purpose and value of it as a bookmark manager or directory builder. Any ideas?

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    http://shoneyscoffee.com/gi/

    landing page for my new game. Need to still hook up the domain :)

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      I like the the colors and the video player, all very clean and sharp

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      Wooow, love the design, colors and font are 🔥

      It really makes me want to scroll and see all the content

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      Hello, I have some UI / UX Feedback for you!. Hope it helps, and lmk if you have any questions

      https://app.usebubbles.com/s4qu957UB9eWE4xPx88hCG/radar-ux-feedback/

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      It's a great landing page IMO; I wouldn't change much.

      My feeling was more about the service: how does it work? What's the catch?

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      I think you should explain how your service want to earn money because right now I didn't find it

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          My opinion is charging from companies because it will be very difficult to charge developers due reason that they can not found a job.

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      Interesting stuff.. you are wasting some space between your logo and headline. If you bring the headline slightly up, you can add another line below your email capture screen to show an arrow to point people to examples. This will give people proof of what they can expect from the newsletter. Otherwise many people would just look at the above-the-fold section and move on without knowing what they can expect.

      Also use google analytics to test different CTAs.

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          looks better but the opt-in for cookies will hide it in your main view

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      Time is money section overlaps the image with certain widths, may wanna take a look

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