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Haha - great work and dedication Hamz!

Your Website looks great! Great pictures and good text. I like the frequently asked questions, but I would do the price part smaller.

I would like to hear what you think about paperless.io

Hero section:

• headline: #1 way to fund your open source project.

The "getting started" section:

• Better to change "Start rysolving" --> "How to get started with rysolv".

Nice product!

If I were you, I'll change the headline in your Hero section to be something like: "More than a survey tool." or "The best, easiest and fastest way to know more about your users".

I think you can remove this section --> "User-Driven Research".

Also, make sure to update your design by hiring a professional UI designer or buying a premade template.

Good luck ;)

I like the website, but I somehow I don´t like the text style. Your header is really great!

Do you have any feedback for us? paperless.io

It looks great. I didn't see anything about pricing. Is it free?

Looks neat and minimal. Maybe add a few more product photos in the 'our candles' page. That's all I can think of. Brilliant work.

You say on the landing page that you have hosted 10k meetings to date. Maybe add some testimonials or examples from those 10k meetings. It helps with making your stuff seem authentic. It's a great tool.

As you say it's missing a few pages. Maybe add more features and pricing on the main landing page.

Nice product!

Your copy is clear enough but, you need to trigger some emotions (time, money, hassle, efforts, etc).

https://justpicksomethingapp.com/

overall, this landing page is good but not clear.

design:

• the font size in the features section is small, I can't read it.

copywriting:

1. if I were you, I'd love to change the Hero to be something like that:

• It's time to discover new and exciting experiences from home!
• With Just Pick, it is possible now to discover unique drinks, flavorful food, and amazing entertainment without leaving your place.

2. Move "What can you discover?" to be after the hero.

https://www.justpicksomethingapp.com/businesses
design:

• I can't read the text in the Hero section, maybe you should change the background or put a dark layer with CSS.

copywriting:

• It's not clear how are you going to help businesses? what data? how does it work?

Looks great. Maybe fill up your about and FAQs pages. That's all. Good luck.

I have nothing to say, everything is good! I might give it a try soon.

Nice, slick design and colour contrast. Great idea.

On my screen the black background doesn't go all the way to the edge of the screen. Looks like it has a max-width of 1600px

Your product looks promising!

design:

• I think you need to rely on a professional UI/UX designer to build your landing page, good design will make it trustworthy and professional.
  I suggest taking a look at my UI library for landing pages.

copywriting:

• all good and clear!
• You can replace "Getting startedis easy" with "Get started in {number} steps" and break the long paragraph into steps.
• you have some long paragraphs, try to break them (changing the design might help) because no one likes to read long text.

Hi Brayden,

The new design looks great!

• Make sure to specify which type of developer? Web Developer?

Overall, it looks awesome.

B2B product with a professional copy and UI.

I have nothing to say :). I help makers because some of them don't know the basics of copywriting and most of them design the landing page by themselves.