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Share your landing/sales page and I'll tell you if I'm persuaded (+ tips to improve)

Hey, I'm a writer/copywriter. If you need a small review on your sales/landing page, pls drop the link below.

I'll tell you if I'm persuaded as a probable customer, if there's things you can improve and rate on a scale of 10 how influenced I am.

Will give you some tips and edits too, if I can.

You can find me on Twitter here - twitter.com/heyarunima :)

on January 16, 2022
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      A strong 7/10 persuaded cause your product is soooo cool. But you can start a strong heading which goes along "Make sure you hear your customer's voice"
      Like, reallyyyy tell me that if I miss customer feedback it's gonna harm my product. Let me know how important it is and then about your features. By the end of your page, I should be worried if I am working on customer feedback enough or not. Then it'll be a 10/10 for me!
      Hope this helps :)
      Sorry for the delay, I forgot I had posted it here :p

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        Thanks! I'll keep that idea in mind, for sure

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    Exactly what I was looking for.

    https://fulldiv.com/

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      Oh this is noice. I loved how skim-readable it was, and all the headings + knowing what I'm getting. It's a close 9/10 for me.

      I'd suggest that you add some student testimonials, some "they got a job after learning from here" testimonials.
      A section of why your platform is better than various others (like coursera, udemy) will also work great (you can add that you provide 1-1 mentorship and so on)

      Rest, it looks good. All the very best. Hope this helped.
      Sorry for the delay in replying :p

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    Thanks for doing this! I'd love to hear what you think about my landing page :) https://shroud.email/

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      Such a cool product you've got there. A solid 8/10 page for me. Loved the second part of your page where you tell me how my email address is sold everywhere.
      I'd suggest you add 1-2 lines on how I can use it. I mean, I get it there are aliases but I couldn't understand if I'll have to use that alias to sign up to newsletters or you'll work on your own in bg. So a bit of clarification will be great.

      All the very best. Hope it helped. Sorry for the delay in replying. Forgot about the post :P