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Sharebloom - Monthly Flower Subscription Delivered Right to Your Door

http://sharebloom.co

Hey Indie Hackers!

I soft launched my landing page for Sharebloom.co earlier today. It's a monthly flower subscription service/platform. I plan on including plants as part of the subscription service as well, but for now I feel like the landing page is already a bit overwhelming and underwhelming at the same time. I feel like the messaging may be too unclear, so I'm turning to you guys to get your feedback. Don't hold back.

I didn't want to use stock flower photos for the initial website because I thought it would be tacky, but any insight as to whether the messaging and illustrations are clear or not would be great.

#landing-page-feedback #launch

submitted this linkon June 19, 2019
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    love the illustrations and design of the page!

    for a subscription i do think a few photos will help potential customers in understanding the types / size / styles people can expect. maybe something that pulls in a hashtag of "in the wild" photos. even if you have to take photos of photos in your own house at first to get it started.

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      Yes great point @daverad, I agree. I set up a studio photoshoot for a couple weeks from now, so hopefully I'll be able to launch the full site by then with real pictures :) Thank you for the feedback!

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    Some changes I would make:

    1. "Flowers delivered to your door every month. Handcrafted bouquets from amazing local florists. (add a space here and make the font smaller) Change or cancel your plan at any time".
    2. Cut off the part "make a lasting impression..."
    3. "Scientific happiness.." make the text a clickable link
    4. there's a typo "Why not make every day a special occassion?". Occasion with one "s".
    5. add the pricing, right now I have no idea about how much it will cost.
    6. Are you sure that it's better to deliver always the same bouquet? I don't know the market but to me sounds better a different bouquet every month
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      This is really helpful @Luqa thank you! I'm going to apply the copy changes tonight. In regards to the bouquet delivery, it will be the same "style" but not the same arrangement. I should clarify that as well.