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Shopify x Zoom : Request for Landing Page and Marketing Feedback/Advice

Hi IHers -

I'd love some feedback/advice what you think of our landing page and on how we should go about promoting our platform.

Landing page here: https://loop.landen.co/

The platform we offer is an all-in-one solution for quickly and easily starting up a business through video call. Rather than selling a tangible product, the product that is sold is the knowledge of the host. This can range anywhere from tutors, master hobbyists, counselors, etc.

The product is a combination of video call, payments, scheduling, and custom web storefront.

The platform has been in the works for a while now, but with the recent COVID-19 quarantines, we believe that right now will be the most beneficial time for us to launch for fellow entrepreneurs.


My questions for the Landing Page are:

Does the landing page successfully communicate our product in the first few seconds?

Is there a better way to communicate "video call business"?

What advice/feedback do you have for us?

My questions for Marketing are:

How should I be promoting our platform?

What are your initial questions about our product that you have so that I can be prepared?

Which markets do you think will benefit most from this product?


Please feel free to leave your feedback/advice in the comments.

Thanks so much in advance!

on April 6, 2020
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    Value prop is not clear.

    1. "We help run the business of you". What does it even mean?
    2. "Loop's all-in-one platform makes it easy to start any business on our video conferencing platform." - Not true. I am sure I can not start a restaurant on your platform. This is a far fetched example just to make a point. But it's not clear what your solution does. What problem is it trying to solve?
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    Hi @samyoshon,

    Nice idea to help entrepreneurs through your platform.

    • Your website has a nice and clean UI
    • The main heading, ''We help run the business of you'' could be improved. May be you could have something like, "Offer services through video''

    All the best.