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Shopping Tracker landing page v2 - Feedback needed

by Sorata

Hi everyone

Here is the latest landing page for Shopping Tracker.

Thank you for all the feedback last time. I have tried to incorporate most of it, and it feels like it has already made a huge difference. So thank you once again!

A specific question though, I wrote something on how it works and more details regarding who it is for, but then it felt as if there was too much text. For now I have removed it, reverting back to the current design. What do you guys think?Do you guys feel I need more detail? And if so, how do I balance that so that it doesn't just feel like too much?

Of course, general feedback on things like design and so on will also be greatly appreciated. Like stated in the previous post, this is my first time, and things don't always feel quite right

Sorata's avatarSorata
on September 21, 2020
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    Hi Sorata,

    User Experience Designer & Webflow Developer here.

    Here are my honest thoughts. Overall, looking at the website it feels like I am scrolling down on a Google Doc.

    • I think you can make a better distinction between different sections.
    • The section for subscription can go end-to-end.
    • There are 3 different button styles (Sign up in the nav bar, sign up in the hero part, Let me know button). I would recommend sticking with one style for consistency.
    • You can make the icons in the 'You are in control' section smaller.
    • You can make the H1 in the hero part bigger
    • Sign up button in the hero part can be aligned to the left.
    • You can add more space between the 'Email address' field and 'Yes, I really want' checkbox.

    Hope that helps.

    iozekes's avatar iozekes
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      Hi @iozekes,

      Thank you for the really practical advice. I'll quickly make those changes and see how it looks!

      Sorata's avatar Sorata
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    There are many ways to track the system of Ecommerce and shopping project. I'm using the Ruby scripts for my COCO shopping site, you can see here https://contemporaryco.com.au/

    cosolse3's avatar cosolse3
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    6 years ago
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    Hi Sorata, some feedback:

    • Your cookie banner is unreadable (maybe it's cause my OS theme is dark?). Can't post a screenshot but it's a dark gray text on a black background with 2 blue buttons for me.
    • I would suggest the style of the "signup" button in the header matches those on the page. Also, I don't think white text on a light blue background has good enough contrast. Maybe experiment with dark text, or try a different button colour.

    I also agree with the feedback from @iozekes, no need for me to repeat them 👍🏾.

    stephenafamo's avatar stephenafamo
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      Hi @stephenafamo,

      Thank you for having a look and well spotted regarding the cookie banner. I also use a dark theme, but obviously haven't checked the banner in quite a few iterations. Actually half forgot about it. So thank you for pointing it out!

      And good point regarding the light blue and white text... I will think about that a bit and see what can be done

      Sorata's avatar Sorata
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