Should I leave my Landing Page alone?

October 31, 2017

Hi there, I've been working on this landing page for a while for my first Saas application and I would really appreciate any input you would care to offer.

https://successontapapp.com/

I would love to hear your thoughts on:

Do you understand the product?
Is there anything that you don't understand/ not clear?
Could you see yourself using this?

Thanks a lot.

Robbie :)

RobbieFraser

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I'm a bit thrown off by the multi color headings but that might just be me

Henricus

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  Thanks for the feedback!
  
  RobbieFraser
  
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My feedback:
- Most images didn't load for me.
- Some of the text/background combinations are very low contrast, making it difficult to read. (everywhere you have the light grey text)
- I understand the general idea but find it hard to grasp how it is useful for me ... maybe show some concrete examples of how people have/could have improved by using your app...
Louis Nicholls

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  Thanks for the feedback louisswiss.
  
  Not sure why the images aren't loading for you.
  Yes I can see how it may be difficult to read the lighter text, I'll have a look at making it easier to read.
  So more of a focus on how this app will help you and perhaps a section with a previous users experience.
  
  Thanks for the input :)
  
  RobbieFraser
  
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    I checked again. Images are now loading.
    
    Louis Nicholls
    
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    9 years ago
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      Hi louisswiss, I've revamped my landing page based on some of the feedback you provided.
      
      I really tried to focus on the benefits of SuccessOnTap rather than simply list the features (trying to address the how is it useful for me piece of feedback).
      
      Finally, I believe this software is truly capable of adding value to anyone's life. What is preventing you from signing up right now? What is the product / message missing that would be the difference between signing up and not?
      
      https://successontapapp.com
      
      RobbieFraser
      
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        Hi Robbie, congrats on the changes. The context helps a lot.
        
        I had another in depth look at your site and my main criticism is still that you focus too much on the features over functionality (ie what the app does vs why the app is useful )
        
        I understand that the app is there to help me achieve my goals by breaking these goals down into achievable tasks which you call habits. There is also a budgeting tool in there as well, which I don't really understand.
        
        So, having understood what your app does, I'm still not using it because you haven't given me a reason to use it. If I want to track my goals and/or break them down into little chunks I can just use a to do list app or trello/calendar...
        
        Why will I achieve my goals faster/more often with your app?
        
        Why should I be breaking my goals down into habits?
        
        What proof do you have that I will be more successful with your app than without?
        
        Please don't be disheartened by my feedback. The app may be very good, you just haven't sold me (an average person looking at your website) on its value yet.
        
        One possibility would be to walk me through the stages of helping me achieve one of my goals - so i can set up the quarterly goals and habits...
        
        Louis Nicholls
        
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        Thanks louisswiss, I really appreciate your direct honest feedback. You've clearly identified areas I need to think about. I'll work on these in the coming week.
        
        Thanks for taking another look :)
        
        RobbieFraser
        
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