Show HN: My first landing page - Flow Trainer
Hi fellow indie hackers,
Just put together my first landing page for a 'flow training' app I'm thinking about building. We want to build an app that keeps you on task and helps you get into flow states while working.
Here's the site: https://flowtrainer.xyz/
Be great to get some feedback and ideas!
Thanks,
Julyan + Will
Hey Julyan! Just a few things:
I've found this in your feature section: "Flow Trainer detects when you're distracted and gets you back on task.". That's powerful. That copy got my attention much better than the hero copy "Enter flow, stay on task, and track focus levels with Flow Trainer." because this one sounds more ambiguous. And getting the visitor's attention with the very first sentence is huge. Maybe you should switch them, think about it.
And finally, the pictures. As a potential user, I want to see the product but I only see stock photos. I know it doesn't exist yet, but you should prototype something with Adobe XD (it's free) or Photoshop. There are a lot of free UI kits that you can use.
Good luck!
Toooo many stock photos... and why this bearded profile is the first picture?