Hi all!
I've been working on what I now call Arbeitr, a tool that provides personalized job recommendations based on what you care about most.
I'd love to get feedback on the landing page and idea, whether it's positive or you think it's terrible idea:)
Thanks for your time!
Nice that you asked for a direct roast — easiest win first: tighten above-the-fold to one ICP, one painful before-state, and one measurable outcome, then place one proof element (result screenshot/testimonial) immediately before CTA. Most pages leak conversions by explaining features before proving outcome.
If useful, I can do a fast 5-point teardown (headline clarity, trust, friction, CTA hierarchy, objection handling) with specific copy/layout edits you can ship today. I’m running a $1 founder pass here: https://roastmysite.io/go.php?src=ih_showih_roastlp_20260330_1348_hv
You've done a great job so far!
Keep up the good work :)
That’s really great to hear, thanks a lot for taking so much time to review it. I will most definitely try to see how I can add some more happy faces to the page. Im a bit reluctant with stock images but maybe I can add some smiling friends;)
And about white spaced and fonts: great feedback! Will work on it tomorrow morning.
Thanks again for your time, really helpful!!
Looks good but the animation is too slow
Thanks for taking the time and the feedback!! With the animation you mean the delayed appearance of text blocks, or the video below?
Yes! The delayed animation of heroes could be made a lot quicker. Animation should be a way of directing where a user should look at a given point in time. The immediate feedback that I saw was "Request early access" and I'm not too sure where should I focus next.
Thanks again! I made it a lot quicker, think it works better this way indeed.
I think the idea is really interesting and the website design is really appropriate for what your product is! Maybe one small thing is to think about the responsiveness of the page? With a normal full-screen width the website looks great, but anything smaller (like a phone screen or split screen on a laptop) and anything too large (like a wider desktop monitor), the font sizing and formatting gets a little jumbled up. Apart from that, great job!
Ah that's good to hear, thanks a lot! :)
Yep, I'll look into the responsiveness, good feedback!
Looks great, very professional. One small nitpick perhaps consider speeding up the fade in's slightly, on my (admittedly old & dodgy) laptop they take awhile.
This is anecdotal, but from speaking to friends looking for work now and remembering my own worries too - theres a paranoia that "these types of good jobs don't exist anymore" and you will be forced to settle for something that doesn't match your goals.
Most people struggle to maintain a very positive frame of mind during this time, so these type of defeatist thoughts creep through, regardless of logic.
I wonder would it be worth re-enforcing in the content that there are jobs like this waiting for you, make the effort to sign up and find them. Perhaps just in passing with a stat, or a quote in the testimonials.
Thanks a lot for your elaborate feedback, really helpful.
I speeded up the fade ins. Was a point Edwinw also made and I think you guys are correct, feels better now.
And I totally feel this paranoia too, that it is impossible to find a really great job and you're almost forced to settle with something you just only kinda like. Think adding some content as you suggested may be helpful, thanks for the good suggestion.
I also vehemently agree with the fade time (I'm personally very annoyed by content that isn't there when I scroll). Maybe even A/B test without it to see if signups perform better.
Thanks a lot! Yep I agree with you, should be faster and it feels better now. Good suggestion, thanks!!
Thank you for your valuable feedback! I'm glad to hear that you find the content professional. Your suggestion about speeding up the fade-ins is noted. Ensuring a smooth and enjoyable user experience is important.
Addressing the concern about job availability and reinforcing positivity is an excellent idea. Providing reassurance that there are opportunities available can be a great encouragement. Incorporating a positive stat or testimonial emphasizing this point could be very effective.
Remember, in the job search process, confidence and optimism can play a significant role, so instilling that positivity in the content can be incredibly helpful. Thank you for sharing your insights!
Not to be rude or anything, but this feels a bit like an awkward response from someone who isn't working on Arbeitr :)
lives
Oh wow, that's bad haha.. Thanks, fixed it!
Also: I think capitalization is inconsistent here:
Should probably be "Great Jobs for Awesome Lives"
Thanks a lot! Changed it :)
Looks good
Minor: First landing section feels half empty to the right of "Great Jobs for Awesome Lives" section. May be pic or video?
Painpoint -- who is it for? [everyone --sure :) may be some naroowing down to a niche segment
Cheers
Very clean and professional looking, easy to navigate. Personally I would have a bit more contrast on your hero section, to make it more memorable.
That's good to hear, thanks!
I have increased the contrast (increased transparency of the header image with white background), hope this helps!
That sounds like a positive adjustment! Increasing the contrast can make the header image more distinct and visually appealing, especially if it involves a white background. It's a good way to ensure that important elements stand out. If you have any further questions or need additional assistance, feel free to let me know!
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You could use some more illustrations. That would make it more engaging. People usually look at the graphics first and then reads the content. See if you can use relevant visuals to top your content.
Good suggestion, thanks! Will add some visuals to it!