"...skills they need to build and shape the future" or "The most engaging platform for..."? Which ss is better?
I was testing both with traffic from reddit ads, but I got shut out of my account randomly (just emailed support).
But I need some quick data since I want to start running tiktok ads today.
Would really appreciate it if you all could let me know which you think is better and, of course, any additional feedback is welcomed.
this is the full landing: https://codera.app
A few "above-the-fold" notes:
1. Headline
• Both headlines are wordy and complex using too many adjectives. Go for something simpler and straight to the point that parents will read and get immediately, like this:
"Kids love to code on Codera"
2. Subtext
• This is where you explain the product further.
• "Kids love to have fun. Codera teaches kids how to code using storytelling, games, and engagement to grow analytical and problem-solving skills."
3. Join 100+ learners...
• Move this block below the CTA button, and give it a bit of top margin so it is clear of the content above
• Also, get rid of the "(ages 8+)" text
• You need to decide on an age range you are targeting and state that consistently.
4. CTA Button
• Change the button text from "Try For Free" to "Start for free".
• Below that in smaller text add "Free tier available • No CC required"
• Get rid of the "Learn more/Scroll down to learn more" button. Not needed and adds to the mess
5. Image
• Use an image that doesn't have text on it.
• Mobile needs the image to either be placed differently or removed. Causes too much distraction under the Text.
Good stuff so far! I will be following along 👍
—Caleb
The 2nd one.
A couple of quick notes on above the fold…
I think "by coding" or "with code" reads better than "with coding" (just my opinion).
I can see the animation being intriguing for kids (robots are cool) but potentially off-putting for over-protective parents (a dismembered humanoid being operated on might be too scary).