So I re-did the landing page based on community feedback. Need feedback.
Hello all,
I recently asked on various platforms including IH about feedback for my landing page of Leansence.
I am grateful for the responses and insights I got and based on the feedback, I have made appropriate changes to the landing page as well introduced 2 new pricing plans.
You can check it out here at : https://leansence.com
I would be glad if you can drop a comment below sharing your thoughts.✌🏻
The landing page is good and the video is quite crisp. However, I would point 2-3 concerns, which I felt:
Hi there,
Thanks for taking the time out to review my landing.
I am redoing the landing page as per the new feedback and your first and third points are already worked upon.
Can you maybe elaborate on the content haphazard part? I am planning on moving the sections(except the footer) after the convert kit form to a new page.
Thanks again for the feedback.🙌🏻
You are welcome Anurag! I had meant about the content alignment on the landing page!! I think this would make it clear
I see in your css that you choose "Gilda Display" as font. But I think the font is not loaded.
https://snipboard.io/d72Hck.jpg
Some quick thoughts from me. Hope this is useful!
I think you should swap the heading and the sub-heading. "The fastest way to establish digital presence across platforms." should be the heading. The "more than just a no-code website builder" doesn't really tell me what the product is, so shouldn't be the header.
I think you can also tweak it to be more user-centric, i.e. "Establish your digital presence across platforms fast!"
I think you could combine "Start your 14-day free trial today." and the "Get started" button into one. Just put "Start 14-day free trial" in the CTA button.
One last thing: I'd recommend using a different font. The serif font you're using now doesn't work too well for product landing pages, in my opinion, unless you're building something surrounding writing or books. Try out a sans serif font and try to bring down the line spacing for the heading. Right now it's spaced out too much.
Hi,
Thanks for the detailed feedback, highly appreciate it.
I re-did some aspects of the page as per the feedback.
Feel free to check it out: https://leansence.com/
It's looking better! Good job.
A couple other things:
Try to add a little bit more white space; for example, put a little more space above and below the CTA button and then a little more space between the sections with the video/image and text. Right now it's a little crowded and overwhelming.
On that note, there's a lot of text to read in the sections below the fold, so I don't know if having auto-play video is a good idea. It's very distracting. Less is more! Either have a little text beside auto-playing video, or don't auto-play the video and have a bit more text. That will make it clearer where you want the reader to look.
It's tempting to throw a lot of information on a page in the hopes that something will catch someone's attention, but it often has the effect of making people stop looking altogether. I recommend paring down the text you have to make it land better.
Thanks, I will look into it.
I am actually a decent coder and have a technical eye for things but designing and copywriting isn't my cup of tea.
And yea, I was adding the benefits of my product before showcasing the features, in the hopes that once visitors understand the problem I am trying to solve, they will be more interested in seeing the features(the way I solve them).
I'm getting excessive padding on the right-hand side when viewing on mobile. You might want to check that out
Fixed.
looks clean