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Someone please review my landing page
by
Uday Agarwal
https://www.voxup.co.in
(comments on just the landing page, not the actual product)
I found the overall language of the landing page, a bit odd. There is punctuation missing in the very first paragraph, but that's not my main point. Sample this - "Find a problem that has the market need to originate your startup idea." Why is this so indirect? Were you trying to meet a word limit? What about - ”find problems with existing market needs". Or, "find problems where people are dying/desperate/waiting for a solution"
Apart from that overarching comment about language, I would like to see a sneak-peak of the product on the landing page itself. Entrepreneurs are going to beat down your door to get such golden ideas. BUT what about the other side? HOW exactly are you getting market-ready problems? Any samples on the home page?
PS: Footer is slightly broken on mobile.
I have the same feeling. Maybe you can use a tool like grammarly or LanguageTool.org to check the copy write?
These sounds odd to me:
Hope this helps!
I like the design of the landing page. However, it somehow doesn't fit to the design of the content page. It also seems that the content page is too cluttered with bars on the to and panels on the side. I would like to see more ideas on one page. Maybe smaller boxes for the ideas that can be expanded to read the text. I would also remove the pagination and go for infinite scroll. I think the content page is where you should focus your effort now, because the landing page is already quite good.