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Startup Process Templates

Hi there, could you take a look at my site and give me initial impressions, would you buy from my website?

https://processwiz.landen.co

on October 27, 2019
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    Good evening, pdufresn,

    I just arrived on the platform, you're the first one I'm going to bring my expertise to.

    So I will try to be as much of an analyst as possible :).

    Positive points :

    The offer is clear
    Low prices
    Fast payment tunnel

    Negative points to change in my opinion:

    • Enlarge the photo in the header and with HD rendering
    • Add a footer with a link to the general terms and conditions of sale and copyright info
    • Add a color to the background of the buttons
    • Make a logo
    • Put the "H2" in bold
    • Repair the link that does not work in the last box. (Contact us)
    • I will also add 2-3 visuals of the contents for sale
    • I will work on the font in the header again to have more impact from the first second

    Here I hope my feedback will allow you to improve your sales page, once again it only remains my feedback. I now leave the place to the others to make a return :).

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      Thanks for the feedback I've created a T & C and also reshifted the website, this has been very helpful! Now just a matter of getting some testamonials on the site and I think I'll be close to a finalized product!

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