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Stratagem Landing Page πŸš€

https://www.joinstratagem.com

Hello everyone πŸ‘‹πŸ»,

Checking in to see what your impression is of the current landing page for Stratagem.

I appreciate feedback of any sort, and will be sure to take everything into account!

If you happen to also be interested in getting access to Stratagem, you can request access here.

Thanks in advance,
Colin

submitted this linkon September 5, 2019
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    heyyy I hope everything is going alright! πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

    1. I think the colors are great! Well doneπŸŽ‰
    2. Make the shadow of the Request ACcess button (call-to-action or CTA) less expanded,
    3. I like the fact that each "section" has a lot of space and It's thought to use all the viewport, right? The only problem is that the user has to scroll down between sections so all that space is seen and it gives the look and feel of "emptiness" . To solve this you can:
      3.1 Make the space between sections smaller
      3.2 Make that when the user scrolls, it scrolls the whole section down or up, so the user sees that empty space so quickly

    Im excited to see the progress!

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      Thanks for the feedback - I'll be sure to get it done ASAP

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        I will be waiting for the improvement! tag me here or on https://twitter.com/devictoribero to show me πŸ˜€

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    Hey Colin! Thanks for sharing your landing page with us. It looks like you've got a great mission on your hands and have a heart for helping other people. Love seeing that.

    Very First Impressions: This looks similar to a Trello board. There's not a whole lot of information here. The accountability piece is appealing and I'm most interested in what that looks like. The colors were a little painful but it's also early in the morning for me :)

    I can see that there's a community element and then what I think is the standout, steal-the-show, value prop - AN ACCOUNTABILITY SERVICE?! I'd put this front and center. If you have a team of people that will personally reach out, ask questions, and keep me accountable.... that could be really cool.

    I just took a Coaching course and think the elements there would be super useful to implement in a service. Search Google for the "GROW" coaching model.

    I'd go with a less-colorful background for most of the elements. The white is a good touch. I think this is a good first draft. I'm all about starting simple and concise and I think you do a good job of that.

    I hope this was helpful!

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      I agree with @BryceV. Put accountability service front and center.

      Regarding landing page, make screenshots larger.

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      Thank you for the help - I've taken the advice to heart and amended the landing page quite a bit. Much appreciated! 😁