Taskineer - Does this sell the idea well?
Heya, I'm building https://taskineer.app, which I'm going to soft-launch soon, and you can of course try it out for free now (with buginess - you might even crash the entire site).
I don't want to explain the product, I'd like the branding and landing page to do the talking :)
If it doesn't make sense after looking at it, then what I'm going for is something based off of an article called "Do-Nothing Scripts" (please Google it, I can't paste more than one link here)
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, thanks!
Something to look into: The experience on mobile cuts off some of the text and I’m unable to scroll over to see the rest. Using an iPhone 11 with safari.
Thanks, I've actually come to realize that even though this service is aimed towards desktop users - the landing page HAS TO work well on mobile. Going to rework the whole thing.
I think it's a great start! Something I would have liked to know right off the bat is who the product is for specifically. (before having to scroll down to "For operators and developers")
I think that "Gradually Automated Checklists" feels pretty general, so I asked myself if I was really excited about this product or not. Making that first part more specific would be helpful!
Also consider adding more icons/imagery or even just more whitespace to break up some of the text in some of the middle sections
Thank you for checking it out!
It's a good idea to change the tagline, you're right it may be too weak. I'm thinking something like "Gradually automate anything"... technically it's true, but that gets even MORE generic. I'll have to think about this one.
As for more imagery and spacing, I also agree - maybe some screenshots of the app in action would be good.
What about something like: "Gradual automation for [insert your target customer segment]"?