Thank you IH! New landing page - better?
Ok, above is the old landing page that the community helped fix. You can see the new one on https://www.lumiate.co.
I still think copy needs to be improved as I'm learning marketing through this project, but it's come a long way thanks to the community!
It has improved so correct me if I am wrong?
You are trying to help other remain productive with less anxiety and stress while using their laptops through mediation and deep breaths?
Thanks for the question. Is this headline more clear?
"Lumiate pulses your laptop's color like the breath cycle. Use the light for guided deep breathing and instant mindfulness meditation while you use your laptop."
I like the name, Laminate
It's pretty catchy for your headline
It took me a minute or so to figure out in that context that Lumiate means to literally laminate your laptop to guide deep breathing and mindfulness mediation
We're going to stick with Lumiate. Laminate is certainly catchy, although it might confuse some people into thinking that it's a physical product.
I can understand why
Laminate in a way can be figuratively lighting up or being used a physical product such as laminate flooring
Good luck, you got this!