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This is my first landing page, is it good?

Hello,
This is my very first landing page, i've read some really interesting posts here, on IH and I've tried to do a good landing page by myself !
Roast it !

https://beta.askingfranklin.com/

on May 11, 2021
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    While this page is very good content wise, I feel it's a bit... bland. Lots of white/grey and no animation, the text isn't centered next to the images, there's a header missing above the companies listed, and I think you could frame their logos or make them clickable. Same thing with the offers, only the middle one is framed and has a colorful CTA. Lastly, you can't say your clients love you and show 5 stars if it isn't true. That's what you'll do once you get your first customer feedback ;)
    Keep up with the good work, you're almost there!

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      Hello,
      Thx for the feedback :)
      I've noted the designs feedbacks and I will fix it !
      For the 5 stars, i've done that because we already have like 100 users on the v1 of the product, but the v2 change the product a lot and provide much more value for users...
      But the product change a lot so i don't know if it's legitimate show 5 stars...

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    I'm not a designer but I can share my feelings.

    I would improve the hero animation - make the scrolling smooth. I see it is a recorded screen, which is great as it shows the real product, but at the beginning when you scroll down it doesn't feel good.

    Two other minor things:

    • I would add some small animations to screenshots below - either replace them with some screenshots as well or make them fade in when you scroll down? It's a little bit too static in my opinion.
    • You list companies without any header. Are they your clients or just companies you like? ;-) Maybe moving "our clients love us" next to it would make it better. I would also try to get some testimonies from them, you show 5 stars but it doesn't mean anything, it's not confirmed by any real user.
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      Thx for the feedback !
      I will change this video for a better one 😅
      I've noted other designs feedbacks and I will fix it !