Thoughts on LP? (prayers are welcome too!)
Link: https://profitron.net
I'm particularly anxious to know:
- How easy was it to understand what the product does?
- If you imagine yourself as an ecommerce shop owner, what objections spring to your mind?
Thank you! Any further impressions and feedback are most welcome 🙏
Here's my reaction video 😜😜😜
Oh and tone down the colors :P I forgot to address that!
This is awesome, thank you! I'll action immediately and release an update over the weekend.
Sounds like a good weekend to me! 👍🤟
The dream is real 💪
Hi Kamil,
The first sentence that made sense to me was the following:
Everything above that sentence didn't make much sense.
I quickly tested a new feature of targetaudience.app which I'm developing and I think you can benefit from them:
Our job is to maximize your shop's profits.
You could run the copy through the editor on the website and see there's barely any pain point or benefit in your text. Talk about the problems you solve and what benefits your tool offers :-)
Great tips, thank you! Just pushed an update that actions your advice in the top two sections, and will continue improving over the weekend.
Interesting tool, have you written anywhere about the tech behind it? Some neural nets or more basic classifiers?
Awesome, looks nice!
I haven't written about it but it uses artificial intelligence to calculate the sentiment and structure of sentences.
Cool tool!
Thanks Ollie!😄
I would hoist the integrations section to the top of your landing page. I wasn't sure what ecommerce services you supported until I scrolled down to the very bottom. This will make it a lot clearer what service you are providing.
Also, if you need help showing off your app, I am developing an app that can help you record explainer videos: https://flowrecord.com/