Thoughts on my landing page? (Productivity Tool)

This is a cool idea.

One thing that I've found is describing the benefits before the process (this may engage users). Right under the first section describe the benefits (i.e. better focus, more fun, increased creativity). Then go into the process. My thought behind this is - if it's not going to benefit me, then I'm not worried about how it works.

I'm not a designer by any means, but it seems like it took me a minute to get to the bottom of the page. I may think about making the process steps closer together.

Lastly, I love the # of words typed. Are there any other metrics you're able to put up that speak directly to the value proposition? Maybe something like the most productive type of music? "We've found that users who listen to classical music have a reduction in down time of 20%"

The landing page is clear, but I would like to see a demo, or at least a video of how it works. I am almost certain I would just play with this for a few minutes (as it is a fun concept), but not use it for trying to be productive.

You came up with a pretty cool idea. I think that could be pretty engaging for users.

The landing page is clear for the most part. I get the general features and concept. There is some room for improvement, though.

The current headline doesn't really do anything to build excitement or intrigue. You're burying the benefit. I would lead with the pain point you're solving. The headline could be as simple as something like "Beat writer's block."

Then in the description below it, I would work in more about the unique aspect in a way that pays off the promise more. Maybe you could position it as a productivity hack based on science or something along those lines.

I would test different wording for the call-to-action buttons. It's not bad. I like that it's descriptive and starts with a verb, but it has the same issue as the headline. There's nothing that ties it to the main benefit.

As for the graphic elements, I agree with the @lgaud that the screen shots are too small. It's hard to see what I'm looking at. It may be better to just show the specific features you are trying to illustrate rather than the entire screen.

I would also remove or change the music genre buttons to bullets or some other type of text. I understand that you're doing it to match what's in the product, but the expectation for visitors is that clicking them will do something (i.e. play a sample, pull up a list of songs, etc.).

I hope that helps. Best of luck.

Interesting Idea @jules7 , Congratulations! :)

Some WoW factors
* Simple and clear
* Why it works section

Some observations
* Screenshots are a tad small, maybe its just me but I think increasing the size will help see the details clearly in the snapshot
* Will it be possible to have a try it section, where you have a glimpse of what you offer by giving the users an area to type and as they type play some predefined music.
* Because of the choice of the background color, page seems to have a lot of white space. Maybe picking some other light color for the sections would reduce that effect.
* I think the "Sign up for free" CTA button needs to have similar styling to what the "start writing - it's free" has. Also, making the login link as button would improve the look I believe

Hope it helps!

I like the music note animation, and I think it's fairly clear what it does (though I don't think I personally would use it!).

On a big monitor I have to scroll past a ton of empty space between each item and the screenshots are tiny. Maybe it works better on a phone? But I'd prefer to see it more compact, particularly for "below the fold".

And the Sign up and log in buttons in the top right don't feel "right" somehow, maybe because one is styled as a button and one as underlined text?

Hello Jules...based on guidance that I have been given in the past, it's best to actually give someone a taste of the experience before you start asking for their information (email etc.). That way they know that they have mada a good decision to be a part of your endeavor. It's like when you're watching a youtube video, and before you know if it's good or not, they are already asking you to like and subscribe...what (?). Give something before you ask for something. I'll try to support further as you proceed.

This is a super cool idea. Never heard of a product like this, but it makes sense. I think explaining the science further, while still keeping it concise would be helpful. Also i think it should be first screen, why it works, how it works, and then testimonials. Very cool concept though!

Thanks for this great product! As a potential user, I would love to know what kind of music is available to listen to with your product. Can you name some genres that I could enjoy as a user in the landing page?

I looove it! 👏🏼 It's immediately clear from sentence 2. In fact, maybe swap lines 1 (just write) & 2.

Really cool idea! Landing page is clear to me (what it is, how it works and value prop).

As with any new/more innovative ideas, I think it'll be great if you can let users try it out before they sign up. My initial thought process "I'd like to give it a go but I'm not keen on signing up without knowing how this woks for me".

Hope this helps.

Looks cool