Updated the landing page using your feedback
Hey Hackers,
I had asked for a review on my landing page and all of you gave a really honest review. This helped me understand where I was wrong.
I just updated the landing page: https://saafone.club
I would love to have another round of really honest feedback.
Also, do signup for the waitlist in case you find the product interesting :)
Hi! I didn't see the previous one, but I think this one overall looks great. One point of feedback is that I feel that most sentences and paragraphs on the page are very long. For example below "Tell us your preferences" and "A clear roadmap", there's a lot of text. Maybe if you can reduce your paragraphs to a few bulletpoints with short sentences, that'd make the website much more easily scannable. Definitely an interesting product though!
@TomMelters Thanks a lot for your feedback :) I'll surely consider this and make the changes :)
Hi Suyog,
Compared to previous LP this one has better content, though I would say that the page lost a bit of its attractiveness.
Can you pls tell me in what sense has the attractiveness gone down?
Overall it's clean and well structured design though previous version seemed more cheerful. Somehow this black background in third section and black image in fourth give design some cold feeling(at least to me :))