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Updated version of landing page for Crash Catch - Feedback Appreciated

I've just made some tweaks to the landing page for Crash Catch.

If you have any feedback it would be very welcome. You can check out at https://crashcatch.com

UPDATE
I've done another update to the landing page (14th May) taking on some of the feedback and fixing the issue on smaller devices and mobiles that I somehow missed wasn't displaying properly.

on May 13, 2021
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    The padding of the elements is off, it feels too squished together.

    The footer and pricing section needs work, if feels more like a wireframe than a design.

    Feel free to add a secondary color for highlights.

    Haven't checked, but not sure this would work elegantly on mobile.

    Instead of almost identically structured screenshots, try showing just parts of the app, or more abstract images that represent the concept (take a look at segment.com)

    You're going in the right direction, but there's still a lot to do.

    Cheers
    Ena

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      Thanks for the feedback Ena.

      Is there any specific area of the padding you think is off, I do agree the descriptions of the screenshots in the blue could perhaps do with being a bit more spaced out.

      I do plan on re-doing the screenshots and animations when I get a bit more time, but its definitely on my to do list.

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    It looks good overall, but there are a few things I'd modify:

    • The screenshots should be bigger, cause they seem to contain a lot of information and are a bit hard to read in this size.
    • Less text. Maybe if the pictures are bigger it won't look like there's that much stuff to read, but I think right now the length of the texts can be discouraging if you're just discovering the product. So less text, but more impact.
    • "Princing" and the end of the first sentence of this section are unreadable because of the background's color.
      Otherwise, looks very good! :)
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      Yea I'm going to have another rethink about the screenshots, don't know why I always seem to struggle with screenshots for some reason.

      I'm annoyed I didn't notice the content doesn't lay out correctly on smaller screens, not sure how I missed that so will be fixing that ASAP.

      Thanks for the feedback

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    Using a mobile the images are not centre.
    The "Security" Nd 'Pricing" text over runs into next sections.

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      Thanks for pointing that out, how I didn't notice that myself though is slightly concerning.

      Thanks for the feedback

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    Hey Chris!

    My opinion: your screenshots are hard to read and (seem to) contain a LOT of information. I would rather have a zoom on one information than a small screenshot with 5 dashboards in it. I'm sure this is fine when using your product, but on your landing page I would change that.

    On my computer (macbook 13") in Chrome, your "Pricing" heading is partially invisible because it's 50% on your dark blue background, 50% on your white background.

    Other than that, I like that you animated the screenshots, I would recommend you do the same with the screenshots in the Hero section.

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      Yea I agree with the screenshots, I always seem to have a hard time with screenshots for some reason. I'll have another think about them, and it should be easy enough to add the animated screenshot on the hero

      How I didn't notice the content doesn't display correctly on smaller screens I have no idea so will definitely be fixing that ASAP.

      Thanks for the feedback

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    Looks like a great product with interesting features. My take:

    • The "Stop replying on your customers reporting problems" section is too heavy to read. To condensed. The titles are almost as big as the rest so it doesnt help on a visual point of view.
    • Integrating all development stacks ? I would definitely put the logos of the major development stacks you're talking about (different environments: NodeJS, PHP, etc) and even a link to a dedicated page for each one of them. This may help your SEO and onboarding.
    • On the features section: i wouldnt start with the dasboard as its not the first thing your user will worry about. But instead make the user analysis stand out, by putting it first.
    • On my screen, the "Princing" title appears black on a dark blue background, unreadable.

    For the rest, the product looks really good, i'm sure people will be tempted to try it out !

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      Thanks for the feedback.

      Are you saying the "Stop replying on your customers reporting problems" needs to be a smaller font? I think at the moment its using an H2 tag.

      The second point is a good idea, I do have a page that details that at https://crashcatch.com/languages which links to a separate page, but having that on the landing page would definitely make sense.

      Agreed focusing on the active user analysis and crash analysis is probably more important to show first before the dashboard screen.

      I have no idea how I didn't notice the content wasn't laid out correctly on smaller screens so be fixing that ASAP.