👀 Want a video review of your website?
Hiya, want an honest review of your site from a copywriting perspective? You're in the right place.
Post a link to your website/landing page and answer the following questions(optional) and I'll send you a detailed review of what you can improve on! The focus, as always, is conversion, conversion, conversion.
- Who's your main target market?
- What do they struggle with (that you solve)
- What's the offer? (eg. signup, free trial, waitlist)
You can ask for multiple pages, but it's best if it's focused on a specific one :)
Just dropping a note for others that Claire is legit! She did a review of our landing page and it was super valuable feedback. We're really appreciative.
+1 to Claire's copywriting skills!
Her review for GummySearch was amazing. I feel SO much better about my landing page now.
Wow really nice of you to do that 🙏. We're actually rebuilding our homepage right now so it comes at the best time.
FYI: we're testing 5 different CTA's on the homepage right now, so you might see some that don't do a great job of conveying our offer. The one we're likely to settle on is "see the logos that match my brand values". 😉
Super curious to see your take on it.
Link to the page: logology
On a pure design front, this is class. The visual tone is so refreshing and appealing to me. I don’t remember the last time I looked all over a website just to see what design choices had been made :)
Wow thank you 🙏 lots of work went into it so it’s awesome that you appreciate it 😀
As @typeofgraphic says, excellent design! You've also got excellent copy. In fact, the strongest headline I've seen on IH so far!
Really stellar. I just make a few advanced suggestions that deal with decision-making. But no big things to change. Perhaps the only thing was the top highlighting testimonials a bit better. Otherwise, a convincing offer!
Some additional CTAs for you to test (FB ads could be a good way)
"Take the quiz and get your unique logo"
"Start quiz to see logos that match your values"
"Take the quiz and we'll make you the perfect logo"
"Take the quiz, get a professional logo in 5 minutes"
These are getting rather long, but hopefully, you get the idea!
One high-level thing that I didn't mention in the review: An advertised 5-minutes is rarely an actual 5 minutes. But you delivered on your promise. Might be work adding some small text saying that it's REALLY just 5-minutes. Might push someone who's procrastinating at work over the edge :)
Here's a video review: https://www.loom.com/share/90d3cdb1dc444cde96f761fa148f03f8
And the written comments: https://app.ruttl.com/share/ChZuiG0jmJsQOonnfBix
Wow Claire, I had no idea what to expect from this, but I feel so grateful that you looked it over.
Thank you so much, these are stellar notes that will help us fix our messaging so that people understand what we do even better. I've sent you an email to continue the conversation.
PS: funny thing is it seems like there was a bug for the loading of the site, seems to be caused by ruttle. So you didn't see the proper font and missed lots of decorative images. So I'm glad you liked it even in that naked state =). (please check out the website directly though I feel so weird that you haven't seen it)
Ahh! Darn, sorry I didn't pick up on that!
The font that you've chosen is WAY better!
Thanks, would love to hear some thoughts!
Who's your main target market? Technical and semi-technical writers.
What do they struggle with (that you solve)? Publishing their content to the web.
What's the offer? Pre-order
Link: https://getaugust.app
Hiya! Here's a video review: https://www.loom.com/share/e752ec45f1cc45a2862c1966e4c299c9
And the comments via Ruttl: https://app.ruttl.com/share/ChZuiG0jmJsQOonnfBix
Wow, this feedback was 🔥. Thank you!
Ah! I just learned that a piece of my advice was slightly incorrect. I mentioned having a percentage (eg. 80% off). Rather stick to the dollar amount as you have it. It's shown to outperform percentages as it's easier to understand.
This is awesome! I’ve just launched thisismyLaunch MVP, it’s a launching platform for new products and services.
You can validate your idea, collect feedback from people, build your audience before you even launch your product.
I would really love to get your feedback!
Here’s the link www.thisismylaunch.com
Hiya!
Here's a video review: https://www.loom.com/share/2942e340e18e4274bb3b345ee6e12238
And your comments: https://app.ruttl.com/share/ChZuiG0jmJsQOonnfBix