We built a legal product for startups, what do you think?

I've scrolled through the page and observed a few things:

that popup with free stuff is a bit distracting. Maybe you should run a separate campaign for it but it was out of nowhere and I wanted to get rid of it right away.
The first section is most important one though all I see is a barely visible logo and a stock image. Might want to add the most important message and CTA. Make the visitor not want to close the page right away and be able to decide whether they want to scroll down or close tab.
the top part "Chat with a Lawyer!!!" looks out of nowhere as well and doesn't seem to follow the vibe of something offering law services.
"Our Company", "Why Businesses Choose Us", "Our Numbers". 2 things here:
- it's all about you, not about visitors. Visitors don't care about you
- give them value in section titles right away (most visitors just read titles) and more sections is better than long text under the section title(few read that on second scroll).
"Affordable And Accessible Legal Solutions For Ambitious Businesses" how affordable is that compared to usual services? it might be a good idea to say something that would mean "10 times cheaper with very well verified experts" (not this exactly, just as an idea). Everyone could say they're affordable. For me that could be $50..a few examples with pricing on what problem was solved and how much it costed.
It's fine to use a template but make sure you choose one that looks clean and trustworthy. I believe yours might need some tweaks here 'n there on colors, what you want them to focus on, sections formatting, that chat throwing me to another page unexpectedly etc. Just take some basic examples and follow them exactly as they have it. No need to reinvent it.

I hope these will help you in building a better landing page and will get you closer to your goal. You're almost there 🤗

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I've scrolled through the page and observed a few things:
1. that popup with free stuff is a bit distracting. Maybe you should run a separate campaign for it but it was out of nowhere and I wanted to get rid of it right away.
2. The first section is most important one though all I see is a barely visible logo and a stock image. Might want to add the most important message and CTA. Make the visitor not want to close the page right away and be able to decide whether they want to scroll down or close tab.
3. the top part "Chat with a Lawyer!!!" looks out of nowhere as well and doesn't seem to follow the vibe of something offering law services.
4. "Our Company", "Why Businesses Choose Us", "Our Numbers". 2 things here:
  
  it's all about you, not about visitors. Visitors don't care about you
  
  give them value in section titles right away (most visitors just read titles) and more sections is better than long text under the section title(few read that on second scroll).
5. "Affordable And Accessible Legal Solutions For Ambitious Businesses" how affordable is that compared to usual services? it might be a good idea to say something that would mean "10 times cheaper with very well verified experts" (not this exactly, just as an idea). Everyone could say they're affordable. For me that could be $50..a few examples with pricing on what problem was solved and how much it costed.
6. It's fine to use a template but make sure you choose one that looks clean and trustworthy. I believe yours might need some tweaks here 'n there on colors, what you want them to focus on, sections formatting, that chat throwing me to another page unexpectedly etc. Just take some basic examples and follow them exactly as they have it. No need to reinvent it.
I hope these will help you in building a better landing page and will get you closer to your goal. You're almost there 🤗
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