We create a Demo design, could u give me some advice?

tried to have a look on my phone. unfortunately the content runs way too wide to be able to read anything. you should run a test there. I'm using an Android Huawei P30 pro

Hi Leon, I've got some critique for you (although it was hard since your design is super neat!):

1. Hero section. The most visible item should be a call to action. It's not - Product Hunt badge is. While it's good for legibility I don't think it should still all the attention. After all you want people to perform an action.
2. Considered using some voice with the video? I loved watching it but I really felt like I could get it so much easier if somebody explained what was happening.
3. You're using a lot of color in the headlines. I've tried to click all blue headlines until I realized none of them are clickable. I would probably stick with white, and maybe use bold or italics if you want things to stand out. Color is usually used best when it's used in buttons alone. Otherwise, it's misleading.
4. Some of your descriptions are 16px gray text and I see no reason why they would not be bigger and brighter. I know it looks neat when the text is faded but it's just hard to read! If you get me to read for that long then I want to know all.
5. Old way vs New way section... I kinda miss the point. Comparisons are great but here it's just not obvious enough why is your product better.

I hope that helps ;)
Olek

I checked your ProductHunt listing and everyone loves your design, what comments are you referring to? You have a great product and the design is wonderful! 😊