Web App 🔥 Landing Page Roast 🔥
I'm making a to-do list app that uses dependencies to help you actually plan rather than drowning in endless tasks.
This is a v1 landing page, so I know it isn't perfect, but I'm keen to work out what to focus on next.
I will gladly lend my thoughts to others' pages!
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Hey, Nich
I would suggest you start by designing on Figma using some readymade kit.
that you should develop.
Now it's this site is lifeless.
I hope will do great
Hey Nicholas, I've left a detailed feedback for your website. You can check it out on this link -> https://app.ruttl.com/share/al94aNVKrJOfiUYYrvFq?page=gWeXbbzrewb0Cr5c7q7p
🥲I agree with the comment that, dependency isn't super familiar term when talking about Todo lists, I personally also find the lack of product explanation videos and pricing table a little out of the ordinary.
😐I saw you have a video where you show adding items to a Todo list and reorganizing them. That surely can't be the USP of your product... let's be honest, it's probably something else that your super ToDo list can do that you can call an USP.
🐱Well that's therefore what I would highlight in the top video.
Keep at it!
Cheers! I have plenty of plans for plenty of features, I had in mind something more than a GIF of the most basic functionality up front - now I know that's worth spending some more effort on :D
There's too much blank spaces on the site and the colors in my opinion have such a big contrast. Try using colors that blend better to reduce the contrast difference in colors. Users get bored easily; if they have to scroll so much they most likely will skip your content/selling point.
I'm working on a website myself and having such a great learning curve with it.
I don't know what "dependencies" are. If your target audience definitely does then that won't matter, but otherwise I always suggest the very first thing to work on is clarifying the messaging above the fold, what your offering is, what it does, who it's for and why they should care.
Some of this you have, but not all. So that's where I'd focus first and on the next action you want the visitor to take. Everything below the fold can wait.
This may help:
https://landingpagehub.net/value-proposition-statement-guide-ffw-1-5-1/
Cheers, thanks for the feedback! The front-matter is definitely the roughest element :D
PS: I'd get rid of "once stable" you're drawing attention to the fact that it's not.
Looks clean and material design,
I recommend you to check this to do web app UI kit :
https://www.figma.com/file/fwXsDYXwh2FqpllGjUiGgG/Task-and-Project-management-app-UI-kit-(Community)?node-id=0%3A1
It will save your time and effort, thanks