We're pivoting - We'd love some landing page feedback!
Hey everyone! My name is Annie Hwang, and I'm one of the cofounders at Jemi (https://jemi.so/)!
Jason and I first launched Jemi last year with an initial focus on monetization because we wanted creators to be their own online entrepreneurs. At the time, our 1 liner was a "Shopify for creators".
After countless interviews, we’ve learned that creators and entrepreneurs not only need monetization tools, but also tools to grow their online presence and brand. Our new positioning is more of a traditional website builder for creators and entrepreneurs. Here’s my website built on Jemi for example: https://anniehwang.me/ We also have a quick write up on how Jemi compares to some other options out there: https://blog.jemi.app/jemi-comparison/ Users can still use our monetization features if they want to, but that's just one out of many features they can use on their site.
We'd love to get your feedback on our new landing page (https://jemi.so) on whether or not you think our value prop is clear enough for a new user to consider using Jemi over other website builders out there.
Thank you so much, and really looking forward to hearing your feedback! :)
I won't talk about the idea specifically but here's what I think is wrong with your page:
Build your dream website in minutes <- super generic, doesn't pinpoint the audience you're building this for. I think your forte is that you're the swissknife for creators?
No controls on video that autoplays. Woops I missed the start - how can I go back? You can't! You have to reload the page. Did I miss the last 30 seconds? I have to go back and rewatch the whole thing
The logos of the companies that featured are cool but you know what would be more cool? Actual websites' screenshots/embedded built by your creators to show off how nicely your platform helps them, possibly with some big data-points!
You could make those "pills" next to "Sell anything you can imagine" clickable to explore the features, i expect to see what i am purchasing as a creator
The website is pretty well done in terms of ccopywriting
I also noticed at the very end the "Showcase" in the menu - so I guess that's another interesting thing to note
wow, this is sooo incredibly helpful. Thank you so much! We're actually making some edits on our landing page today :) A lot of the things you noted will be fixed/updated. Thanks so much again!