What 2 things would you change about my landing page?
Hi everybody! Recently I've been brainstorm ideas about iterating over my landing page.
I have a lot in the works, but I'd like to hear your opinion as well.
What are 2 things you'd change about my landing page? I'm open to any and all feedback!
Here it is: https://www.solfej.io/
You are repeating the same message in your headline and your subheading. Try adding a benefit in there somewhere. How will my life be better if I use your product?
Agree with this point. The page is beautifully designed and aesthetically pleasing, however, the one thing it is missing is convincing the average person that they want to learn music theory. What will I gain by learning music theory? Understand the songs/artists I love better? Be able to re-create songs with just my ear? Benefits like these would help make a stronger case IMO
Two things, hard to limit myself lol
1.) Whitespace in general needs improvement. Read some on proximity principles in design.
2.) Don't duplicate the CTA over and over again. It loses it's appeal.
Hope this helps!
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Okay I couldn't help myself
3.) Don't make it seem like "Early Access" on the landing page. You can after they click through but this may turn people off that otherwise maybe interested and you can't tell.
4.) You repeat the same thing in your headline like someone mentioned. Big no no.
5.) You need some more content above the Featured Stories. Adding a proper footer will help the site seem more complete too.
6.) Make your contact a form not your email address
7.) You don't need Home in the header if the logo brings you there
Under "The Definitive Guide To Musical Cadences", you should be able to sign up for the newsletter directly from the landing page instead of clicking through first.
The sections feel very wide, I would tighten them up a bit although white space is good it feels a bit much here.
Secondly and this is only my personal opinion is I would change the style of imagery it feels to me that every other site is using this style and makes the sites very forgettable.
Good luck with you product.