What can I do to improve my landing page?

Hey Prasanth, glad you're turning your tool into a micro SaaS. Good luck!

Some mandatory roast below. I will mainly focus on the banner section as it determines whether or not I'd scroll farther, and so far, I would not.

H1 can be more specific. It's not too bad, but if you're doing something specific, you should say so. For example, if you're generating PDF from images, I'd go with this:

The best way to turn your image files into a single PDF

In the subtitle, instead of telling me it's modern and affordable, which are quite subjective, maybe tell me what it actually does.
The bullet points under the subtitle.. The first point "PDFs, screenshots of URLs..." really confuse me. Up until now I kind of thought I had an idea where this was going and here I am totally lost.

I don't know what that means, even though I am a developer who has programmatically generated PDF not once.

Bulk generate? What's the use case for this? If there's one, mention it. Sell the benefit (== solved problem) not a feature
Import data from Google Sheets.. Same as above I guess. I don't know what Google Sheets date has to do with PDF generation. Maybe it does. Show me.
In the sign up form on the right you say I get 100 free credits per month. I have no idea what these credits are. Is it too much? Is it too few? This is overly arbitrary. I don't even know what 1 credit costs.

Maybe say something like "Generate ~5 average sized PDFs / month for free"?

In the pricing section $ signs are too small. I first thought the prices were in a different currency.
Like the overall look, plain and simple. If you do want to spice things up a bit, I'd go with introducing a new color for the C2A buttons.
Like the name, simple and to the point.

That's it from me. Hope it helps.

If you want to roast me back, here you go: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-i-will-roast-yours-6b35f5f999

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Hey Prasanth, glad you're turning your tool into a micro SaaS. Good luck!

Some mandatory roast below. I will mainly focus on the banner section as it determines whether or not I'd scroll farther, and so far, I would not.
- H1 can be more specific. It's not too bad, but if you're doing something specific, you should say so. For example, if you're generating PDF from images, I'd go with this:
The best way to turn your image files into a single PDF
- In the subtitle, instead of telling me it's modern and affordable, which are quite subjective, maybe tell me what it actually does.
- The bullet points under the subtitle.. The first point "PDFs, screenshots of URLs..." really confuse me. Up until now I kind of thought I had an idea where this was going and here I am totally lost.
I don't know what that means, even though I am a developer who has programmatically generated PDF not once.
- Bulk generate? What's the use case for this? If there's one, mention it. Sell the benefit (== solved problem) not a feature
- Import data from Google Sheets.. Same as above I guess. I don't know what Google Sheets date has to do with PDF generation. Maybe it does. Show me.
- In the sign up form on the right you say I get 100 free credits per month. I have no idea what these credits are. Is it too much? Is it too few? This is overly arbitrary. I don't even know what 1 credit costs.
Maybe say something like "Generate ~5 average sized PDFs / month for free"?
- In the pricing section $ signs are too small. I first thought the prices were in a different currency.
- Like the overall look, plain and simple. If you do want to spice things up a bit, I'd go with introducing a new color for the C2A buttons.
- Like the name, simple and to the point.
That's it from me. Hope it helps.

If you want to roast me back, here you go: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-i-will-roast-yours-6b35f5f999
mzrnsh

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  Fantastic feedback @mzrnsh ! I will incorporate these into my page right away.
  
  Prasanth P
  
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