I would love to get some feedback on https://www.reimburse-it.com/en/. What do you think could be improved on the page? Any tips or help is welcome!
https://www.reimburse-it.com/en/
One of the first things is this:
I have more questions before reading that :D
Yes! Please tell me!
Uhh. For what? Mailing list? How does it help me to answer the question that what you can do for me?
Umm. Could you just tell me how you're going to help me first? You're first asking to subscribe and then to share. That's along way too much. I just wanted to know what the service does for me.
That's it? Your service helps me and my business by handing out free t-shirts?
Sorry for the rant :D That was literally the first paragraph on your mobile landing page. It probably should be the last one.
aha i might have you review my site once it's up
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Post to https://roastmy.site to get some honest feedback ;)
Done and done :)
Roasts incoming! 😂
Please be nice- It's hard to keep morale upp :(
The better the roast, the more motivation to get to work
Very nice site! Only thing that you may want to expand on is the benefits to the company, the accounting dept. or controller.
Absolutely, it's hard to write a text that's intended for two people. I'm going to try to figure something out!
It’s slow to load! How big is it.
Sorry it's slow! It has to do with different sized backgrounds in my latest iteration I only uploaded the highest resolution versions! Let me know if right now it's better!
Here my humble opinion: there is no need for further improvements. The page looks OK. I instantly understood the concept and found the download links.
You would be better to go and work more on your product. It's much more important.
Quick feedback :
Good luck !
If you checkout the website again, I changed the fonts! I hope the title font is okay like this?! I followed recommendations by top 10 web-fonts used the one I liked myself the most.
I changed the footer so the Trustpilotbox matches, the size. They changed the trustpilot box designs that's why it looked so weird. I hope it's better like this!
Yeah, font is not quite attractive, you might be wanting using a different font (eg. hand-written) from place to place.
Need to find something creative to do with the header, any suggestions? The buttons i'll play with the colors, fonts, i'll work on the logo and footer thing!
Yeah, good point!
See https://usabilla.com/blog/8-guidelines-for-better-readability-on-the-web/ @eayollie for more info
Thanks for the article, I did some takeways from this! Used the recommended font-size and reduced some of the texts!
The first question I had - how is it different and better than Expensify and the like? Direct competition is very hard and expensive, but being different can be a very strong advantage when it creates more value for a particular niche. If you're different - talk about it at the top of the page.
Otherwise, too much small font text, very wide paragraphs, very difficult to read. I'd shorten the width of the paragraphs, make the context more concise, and add more supporting visuals, just so that it's a bit easier on the reading.
Absolutely right on competition! We should make it more obvious why people would want to go with us instead of competition.
I edited the pages a little bit with larger font, I tried to rewrite the text so it's on the point, 2 lines at most at a time.
Visuals I need to get some idea what would work, but I hope it's already an improvement like this!
Cool first impression!
"Where to get" sounds a little non-premium. Maybe "Get the App" would be better?
Then there is "appp" in the Case Study ... and an s is missing:
"expense and fill out the form" should be "expense and fills out the form"
Not sure about "the expenses that Sarrah makes" ... probably "the claims that Sarrah has filed" sounds better? Minor things like that should be improved ... but the overall impression, colors and feel are great.
I changed the "Where to get" to "Platforms" for now, maybe that's good? Def. going through the pages with grammarly.
Hire a freelance copywriter if you can.
Looks great! Really seems like you're tackling an important pain point for many businesses.
Regarding feedback, perhaps you could have one CTA instead of two, to help simplify your message a little. I would also consider bumping up the body font size slightly.
Other than that, the landing page is coming along great! Best of luck!
I changed the font body size to 16px, somebody here gave an article and it quoted that 16px is one of the best sizes! I hope it's better now.
Also I'm doing some a/b testing with the CTA's to figure out what actually works or not!
Congrats on the launch
Spread the word - space to fill the email is too wide.
Footer - Left column buttons are not properly aligned (language dropdown and Trustpilot)
Not sure, if orange is the color I'd go for. Maybe green since your logo has a mixture of green color.
Other than these, the page looks good to go.
Orange is the new black right! But you're absolutely right maybe the logo needs to better match the design or vice versa!
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I agree with you, just hadn't figured out the right picture. What do you think about: https://imgur.com/FABrBVI (it's already live too btw).
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