What do you think about gitlapp's landing page?
https://gitl.app/
Hey! 👋🏼 I am building a native iOS client for GitLab, called gitlapp. I would really like to get feedback on the landing page, especially concerning your understanding of what gitlapp is and what its value proposition is.
I use gitlab
I think the only change I would do to your page is that I would explain the benefits of using your app.
Here's an example
You say:
I would say:
Do you see the difference? I am giving the benefit and feature :)
Thank you for your feedback! Your point is definitely valid, I have just updated the feature descriptions accordingly.
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Thank you very much for your extensive feedback!
I have considered your notes and agree with the first point. Consequently, I have revised the USP and the CTA in this preview. With it, I have also increased the font size as suggested and applied the coloring of GitLab's branding which should be no problem considering their trademark guidelines. However, I will not change the app's name, since I think it would resemble the trademarked name (i.e., GITLAB) too much. The app is closed source, hence there is no statement of open source.
What do you think of the preview? Is the product description too lengthy already? What additional changes would you make?
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It should be working now. Sorry!
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Which URL are you accessing? It's working for me at staging.gitl.app.
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Thanks a lot! I have incorporated your feedback, these changes are now live in production.
I already had the idea with a demo video as well. Will definitely do that once the app is launched.