What do you think about my landing page? - Writerie

Great job, Michael!

• It seems to try to sell too soon, imo, 2 seconds on the site and I read "…then only €10 a month". When you say "Start your free trial" I already know that I have to pay. The rest is redundant at this stage, at least.

• The slideshow arrows don't work.

• The "What you get" area is hard to read because all of the elements compete in importance. I would create some hierarchy by making the sub-headers and paragraphs smaller. A good rule of thumb of a great design is to look at a page, then point at the elements by how bold they in a descending order, ie. count 1, 2, 3, etc. If you have trouble deciding who's number 2 in importance, for example, then make one of them smaller / lighter, etc.

• Also, those features are awesome, but nobody is gonna read all that. I think having screenshots or images next to each one will make it easier for people to grasp what it is about.

Just being brutally honest. You've done a great work. Keep it up!