What do you think about our newest Landing page?

Hey Kien,

Hope you are ready for some honest feedback!

• Your main CTA needs work. "Build your E-commerce store by the easiest way" something doesn't read correctly with that. Maybe "The easiest way to build you own e-commerce store"
• Your other CTA of "Free Trail Now" doesn't sound right either.
• If you will truly have an overview video that is worth something, don't hide it under a secondary button. Remove that generic image and put it there.
• "Install LayoutHub" to where? There needs to be much more here.
• "See all template" needs to be plural.

After that many grammatical and odd phrases I typically stop as a reader. Try and get some proofreading in your target language. You have a good start.

Good luck! ✌️

Hi Kien, love the concept. Really good aesthetics overall. I m with @JustinCruz on the CTA, seems confusing
Also:

1. Watch video I will label it as "View Demo", as its more a demo. I would recommend doing a video with more explanation, this is a posible solution for me personally but I am like, you have 1 minute of my time, convince me.
2. I recommend doing an A/B test with the CTA. I love the minimalistic approach but I experienced better conversion rates with more eye catching colors
3. Generally lots of gramatical errors.
4. I would add testimonials, its a really good way to create trust with the user
5. ¿No pricing? Sometimes not knowing if its free, how much it costs or the specific features can freak the user out
   If you need help creating a better video or with the copywriting hit me up at ivanandrestaba@gmail.com !
   Best