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What do you think about the landing page?

I'm working on the landing page for the launch of our mobile app to get some first users.
But I don't know it is clear enough for audience.

I'll really appreciate any of your advances to help improve it (about content, keyword, layout, images,...)

Here is the link: https://pentime.app

Thank you!

on December 11, 2021
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    Hello, I am confuse with your page, I understand the idea of keep it simple for a clear idea, but still is confusing.

    1. First the title is good, but the CTA button should show me "How you do that for me" , you can't link me to the contact form without understand what are you offering me.
    2. Title of the page is Home, should be pentime
    3. I think you should show some images to support your value, so I clear understand what is your product
    4. The last quote is lost
    5. If you want only text in your page, your font size should be bigger

    Regards!!

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    Hey Lee.
    I kind of get what you are trying to do. My first thought was "not another note taking app!". Here are some observations:

    1. Too much white space
    2. The font is too small
    3. Too much test, long, complicated sentences
    4. Can't see a point of difference
    5. The thing about Scientific Brain Dump made no sense

    I think apps like that benefit from show-don't-tell approach.

    If that was of value I'd appreciate feedback on search functionality of stackmuncher.com. It is very confusing and I need external input to get unstuck.