What Improvements should I make to improve the landing page?

Your headline is too generic. I would swap it with the copy underneath about creating plagiarism-free content 10X faster it so that you lead with a specific, concrete benefit. The AI is good to mention, but it's a feature, not a benefit.

If you're going to have two CTA buttons, you should make one secondary to the other. Make sure your primary button is what stands out.

I like that you try to show the product with the animation, but it needs a bit of context, especially since the text on the screen of the animation is small and hard to read. Let people know what they're looking at and how that impacts them. Explain how this demonstrates the benefit of the product.

Try to strengthen your copy, especially your subheads. Focus more on benefits. Things like "Localy Is The Perfect Solution For You!" are too vague (in what way is it perfect) and lack credibility (how would you know what's perfect for me?).

I don't think the section on AI in general adds much. I would get rid of that or weave those points into the rest but make it specifically about the product.

Having an FAQ isn't a bad idea for addressing concerns or overcoming objections, but I think some of the questions and answers could actually have the opposite effect. They could give people reasons not to convert that they may not have thought of such as not getting a potential refund or hitting a usage limit.

Best of luck!

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Your headline is too generic. I would swap it with the copy underneath about creating plagiarism-free content 10X faster it so that you lead with a specific, concrete benefit. The AI is good to mention, but it's a feature, not a benefit.

If you're going to have two CTA buttons, you should make one secondary to the other. Make sure your primary button is what stands out.

I like that you try to show the product with the animation, but it needs a bit of context, especially since the text on the screen of the animation is small and hard to read. Let people know what they're looking at and how that impacts them. Explain how this demonstrates the benefit of the product.

Try to strengthen your copy, especially your subheads. Focus more on benefits. Things like "Localy Is The Perfect Solution For You!" are too vague (in what way is it perfect) and lack credibility (how would you know what's perfect for me?).

I don't think the section on AI in general adds much. I would get rid of that or weave those points into the rest but make it specifically about the product.

Having an FAQ isn't a bad idea for addressing concerns or overcoming objections, but I think some of the questions and answers could actually have the opposite effect. They could give people reasons not to convert that they may not have thought of such as not getting a potential refund or hitting a usage limit.

Best of luck!

SeanKirby

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