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What is missing in this landing page?

https://bountyrush.com
Bounty Rush is a rewarding platform for gamers. We reward players for playing games.

Developers integrate our SDK's into their games and publish on stores with the rewardable activities.

B2C(gamers) is being targeted on the landing page.

We come from a gaming technical background and newbies in terms of content writing. Can someone suggest what is missing and what needs to be improved in this website?

on October 15, 2021
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    Hi, @ayyappa99

    It looks pretty good to me, but I've noticed two minor things.

    1. It is cool that when you hover over the phone mockup it tilts as you move your cursor. What I would like to know is is it possible to make them all not aligned to an identical angle? Especially the last one.

    2. I would suggest some time in the future making "Play", "Discover", and "Redeem" clickable, where visitors would be able to find out more.

    Other than that, good job!

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      Giving more info for each is a nice idea. I will look into it. Thanks for the feedback :)

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    Hey ayyappa99. Pretty slick landing page. I would add more copy conveying the value to your target customers. I’m assuming you want the gaming companies to pay you for this SDK. If so, talk about what value you’re going to bring to those companies. How does you having this player data help them out? Why should they pay you?

    Edit: I see that this targets the player actually. But the same point exists. Tell me why, as a player, I should join this? What kind of rewards can I expect?

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    I'm not a gamer, but the first question I would ask is what kind of games do I get to play.

    Also, there are lots of scammy reward systems (i.e. where you need to spend absurd amount of time to earn anything good). Some details/social proof good mitigate this.

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    I love how interactive your LP seems. However, I'd definitely clarify what kind of games and rewards are... well, fair game. For example, is it only mobile games? I think the easiest way to do it is by creating a 'How it works' section and then showcasing it step by step.

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    You should add few things to make it look perfect.

    I have 7 years of experience in creating high-converting landing pages. For the last 7 years, we have worked side by side, serving some of the top eCom brands worldwide, designing and developing their landing pages, websites, and applications.

    Here are few points to improve the Landing Page.

    1. Add Announcement Bar
    2. Add One Call To Action block
    3. "Join the Club" button is not easily visible
    4. Footer Alignment is not proper
    5. Mobile Layout have BIG White Space after Hero section

    If you would like to create awesome Landing Pages in minutes, you should check Pagemaker once. 🤝

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      Thats a nice list. Will have a look at Pagemaker. Thanks for your inputs!
      Edit: Your product PageMaker has pretty good templates! Thanks for the direction!

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