What is your elevator pitch?

Very cool idea! I agree with the other comment, shorter is better.

The value prop I'm getting is the notifications - Never miss an opportunity with Stock Alarm, Stock Alarm alerts users in real time so they can spend more time trading, etc...

I love the idea. Here are a few thoughts:

1. Do not start with a statement.

2. It needs to be much shorter.

3. You are telling me how not why.

4. Try to stay away from jargon words like "sentiment".

5. Do not mention social media.

The point is to generate a wow moment where the listener has to know more.

For example,
"StockAlarm alerts traders to the opportunities available now."

An elevator pitch is spoken. It is the answer to "what do you do?"
In 3-5 seconds, it should prompt me to ask, "how do you that?" or "tell me more."
Tell me why not what or how.

For example:
"We find opportunities."
Or
"We find remote opportunities."

In the follow-up questions, you can explain how.

Nice idea. I would use that product.

Remember that an elevator pitch is spoken. It is what you say in response to "what do you do?"

For example,
"Aasaanai provides point-and-click access to machine learning models."
or something like,
"Aasaanai gives machine learning to everyone."

What we are looking for is a means to prompt the other person to ask, "how do you do that" or "tell me more".

It is clear. However, not very conversational. What you want is something that prompts people to want to know more. An elevator pitch is how you respond to, "what do you do?"

It should be a few seconds in length, have a wow factor, and entice me to want more.

For example,
"We increase views of YouTube videos."

What is not important yet. You can get into that during the conversation. This one-liner needs to say why.

Thank you. I am in the midst of clarifying myself. That is what prompted this post. Great feedback.

The thing to remember is that the elevator pitch is spoken. It is not normally associated with a link. Instead, I want people to say, "how do you do that?" or "tell me more."

An elevator pitch is not a slogan. It is the spoken response to "what do you do?" This needs to be in a way that makes me ask, "how do you do that?"

For example:
"I make it faster for you to get paid"

Sounds good but it does not answer "what do you do?" The elevator pitch is spoken and should begin with I, we, or product name. It should cause me to ask, "how do you do that?"

For example:
"I provide instant access to mobile commerce"

If I were to ask you, "what do you do?" How would you respond? This is the elevator pitch. Not what or how but why. Something that makes me want to say, "how do you do that?"

For example,
"I provide business wisdom to internet founders."

You are asking me a question, not saying what it is you do. The elevator pitch needs to make me curious to know more.

Start with the benefit, not the what or how.

For example, if you make lab samples easier to track:
"We provide a faster way to track lab samples."

Love the name.

If I ask what you do, you would reply, "Highest quality developer resume in less than 5 minutes."? Remember, this is suppose to be a conversation starter. Something to grab interest and solicit additional questions.

A few ideas:

1. It is a bit long.

2. "Sync your account" does not give me the wow factor.

3. "Choose a great looking design" is more of what not why.

4. "That easy!" is not needed. Imply that it is easy, do not say it.

For example,
"We build job landing resumes for developers in 5 minutes or less."

Very good pitch. I clicked on the link and got a security error.

Short and sweet. However, it does not give me the desire to know more.

A few suggestions:

1. Tell me what your app does in terms of value prop.

2. "Read wherever, whenever" makes me think of Amazon Kindle. I think you have more to offer.

3. Why is your bookmark better than Google Chrome or Safari? Tell me that in a few words.

What you need is a conversation starter. For example:
"We provide a personal catalog of the web."

NOTE: Your website SSL certificate has an issue and will not let me view the website. It says the certificate is for lukaspapay.com.

Not bad. However, when I hear SEO, I think, "got that covered." It is a conversation stopper.

Instead, come up with something that says here is what I do and this is why you need it. All within 2 to 3 seconds of speech.

A few thoughts:

1. Stay away from words like "break".

2. The phrase "3 simple steps" is boring in conversation. This needs to be an auditory message. Save that for the website copy.

3. I like the term "find ranking opportunities". Perhaps focus on that.

For example:
"We discover ranking opportunities for struggling websites."

Based on your niche, it could be dentist websites, startup websites, saas websites, etc... What you must have is a way to prompt the listener to ask, "how do you do that?"

A few ideas:

1. Tell me what you do, not what I should do.

2. Remove words such as bottlenecks and streamline as these are overused - causing the listener to lose focus.

You want it to be interesting while projecting value.

For example:
"We help freelancers accomplish more with less effort."

A few ideas:

1. Tell me what you do. It is not a tagline but a conversation starter.

2. It is not very interesting and does not prompt for more questions.

Instead, something like:
"We untangle leaders from multiple projects."

The point is to say this is what we do and have them reply, "tell me more."

You are on the right track. Here are my thoughts:

1. "Build" and "Create" essential is the same.

2. "your website," says that the user already has a website.

On your website, you explain, "Create beautiful websites that convert. No developers. No code." Since "No code" and "No developers" essentially means the same. What you are hinting at is that you help SaaS founders build a community. However, that is not said anywhere.

Why not something along the lines of:
"We provide no code websites that build communities."

Thanks for sharing. A few suggestions:

1. Too long. It needs to say here is what I do and here is why it matters in a few seconds.

2. Do not start with a statement. Begin with what you do.

3. Remove the buzz words such as "cognitive psychology". Unless you are a Psychologist, these types of phrases make people question the value.

4. Do not give blank "Users claim" statements. Later in the conversation, you can explain customer feedback. Not in the pitch.

What you want is something that makes the listener say, "tell me more."

Perhaps something like:
"We provide brain hacks that reduce procrastination."

Thank you for sharing. A few thoughts:

1. Do you need to say "static websites"? Will it work for a non-static site too? Either way, it is probably implied that people with static websites would be the target audience.

2. "Capture email, feedback, and other details" seems to be confusing. Why do I need to capture email? What am I capturing it for? Is there a better way to say that?

What I am getting at is the value of "without writing backend code". Would saying something like "drop-in" work instead?

For example, "We provide drop-in website components that give user insights."